Synopsis
Beatrice was supposed to be the one to bring happiness to the world, but sadly, that was not what happened.
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- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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The story is fine for me and awesome. Also liked the fact that the interactions were solid. Though don't overuse the he said she said. It breaks my immersion. Also liked the story though and I can say that the future is bright ahead. Keep it up and don't stop writing. Improve more and you will find success [img=recommend]