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Villain x Villain
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Synopsis
Keith Rovan, a crazy guy who got transmigrated inside a novel as an extra named Eric Jonas. In the novel, Eric was a child who never received any kind of love or affection from his family because of that, the struggle he had to face are numerous. However, the silent endurance of his hardship, slowly leads him to the edge of suicide as an escape from the cruel world.
Who wants to live and die like that character, especially Keith who had an polar opposite character of weak Eric. So eventually, he decides to change the original plot. Not by acting as an angel, instead a devil who lives for his own desires without concerning anything. He never hesitates to dominate over others or eliminate the ones that dare to cross his path. However, his path dramatically leads him towards the future ultimate villain, Abaddon Mir.
They are born enemies because of their families, rivals in name, but what crazier is… with time, the rivals are turning into toxic lovers.
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I really like the idea and plot so far, but tbh the auther clearly needs a beta reader.
Honest review after reading 10 chapters. Writing quality isn't best. It made it really hard to read, enjoy and understand what was happening. It was especially annoying when a new character is just mentioned out of nowhere. But, the story has potential. Honestly, just improve the grammar, vocabulary and flow of the story and it won't be so bad. Keep up the work author.
The story definitely has potential, but a proofreader is truly recommended. Right now it is a hassle to try reading this piece.
Thank you for the review. It means a lot to me that you took the time to read it and share your thoughts. Unfortunately, it didn't get published, so I have to post it by myself. Thanks again for your support and encouragement!
Thank you for the review. It means a lot to me that you took the time to read it and share your thoughts. Unfortunately, it didn't get published, so I have to post it by myself. Thanks again for your support and encouragement!
Thank you for the review. It means a lot to me that you took the time to read it and share your thoughts. Unfortunately, it didn't get published, so I have to post it by myself. Thanks again for your support and encouragement!
Hello guys, Author here. I am very grateful to everyone who read and support my novel. It means a lot to me that you enjoyed my story and characters. I want to give a special shout-out to Kiria94, who has been a loyal and supportive fan since the beginning. You are awesome! I also want to apologize for any grammar errors or typos that might have made the reading experience less enjoyable. I am not a native English speaker, so I sometimes struggle with writing correctly. I hope you can forgive me and appreciate the effort I put into this novel. Once again, thank you all, for your patience and support.❤️