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Uzumaki Touma
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The story about a survivor from the main lineage of the Uzumaki Clan. Watch how his story unfolds and how his decisions changed some of the plot and journey of his first cousin Uzumaki Naruto.
Uzumaki Medical and Sealing Nin, Taijutsu expert, Body Revival Technique, and 8 Gates.
I don't own the art on the cover and I only took it from google.
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The main character is quite fleshed and has a nice background, his powers are creative and really smart for an uzumaki. The only problem I have on Touma is how his intelligence fluctuates between serious/innocence/clown/dense/genius... Everything else is really good. The grammar is godly, frankly author's prose and rhythm is really good. His timing and creativity is the best thing on this fiction. The story so far so good, yet some things aren't clear: Tsunade- She only participated on the third war at the start, when Dan and Nawaki died she retired to healing-only duty, she only left the leaf when Orochimaru's experiments resurfaced. Thus she should have been able to help Touma's father. Kakashi was Minato student the year before the war started, and then they got the full team, where are them? Not even a mention? That's weird, knowing how Kushina or Minato are, they would have spoken of them. Well, still, 9/10. Awesome.
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Ultra shameless review from the author 😂 I’m new to writing so I hope you can bear with me. I hope you’ll enjoy reading as much as I had fun writing. Thanks for the support!
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I start read This i like but MC dont want to kill ****er your in Shinobi wolrd ... And This stupid ***** And MC talk he is Just a serv to her, Just This make me hate This novel .....