Synopsis
A paragon is an entity of unmatched power and potential, fated to go against the fate of the universe. Each appearance of a paragon has brought great change to the lands of the Primordial Battlefield.
After falling victim to the fallacies of late-stage capitalism, I found myself somewhere completely different, and I have a lot of questions.
Why is there this [-System-] calling me the Usurper Paragon?
Why can't I remember my name?
Why am I hearing these weird voices in my head?
Why am I... am I... WHY DON'T I HAVE A FACE WHAT'S GOING ON WHAT THE FU-
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The writing quality is actually pretty high in this book, cant say much about world building as it just started but. It seems promising. Now a few tips that i think could help are that, you probably shouldnt add any type of romance. With it not really making sense as the Mc is another species. And dont add a female Paragon as it will just feel forced and ruin the story. Also dont make the protagonist a hero or antihero that tries to save the world. Because i feel like its getting over used and wouldnt match the Mc personality. Now he dosent have to be a villain either. He could just be willing to do what it takes for his goal. But overall i like where the story is going.👍🏼