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Synopsis
An ordinary person and Obito Uchiha fought for rebirth and one of them got everything that the other had. What will the new person eventually do in the world of secrets, treasures, beautiful girls, and pirates?
English is not my first language, I don't own Naruto or One Piece. Enjoy reading =)
Harem. Slow update.
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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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The author have written in his synopsis that this story wasn't a harem, we're at chapter 9 and now the mc will have 3 girls...And like always on webnovel the mc is a dark/emo/uncarring mc who only think to experiment and/or crush peoples ...How original of him... I really don't know why I keep expecting better from the authors here. Don't think the story is worth it but it's your choice.
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Autor lied. He say that his story will not become harem. But its clearly a harem. Its just standard dark oc, nothing orginal about that, but still. I like the concept. 2/5
The Anti-harem sect mourns this fallen book. We shall forever remember the happy times, before the plague of Harem-itis tempted and seduced this once great story.
i really like this one, aside from a few spelling mistakes it's ok since my brain autocorrects it. also im looking for a good one piece fanfics
I only read the first chapter, and I like the concept of it (Plus look at the novel cover, that's so cute). Has potential. Writing is understandable, updating stability is what I'm not sure of but from what I can see is that author updates daily while editing their old chapters. Not sure for the MC's character design but I love the use of sharingan's gengutsu.
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i like since its obito but the story is so hard to follow, i just cant wrap my head around it. very hard to understand whats going on but that's about it
I have no shame and I give myself 5 stars for everything. I just love Obito from Naruto and i love One piece, so I decided why not? And this is how this novel was created, No Harem, No system.