/ Fantasy / Two worlds Apart:The Forbidden Love
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Synopsis
{ MATURE CONTENT. NO RAPE}
It feels like they have known each other forever but they just met.
How could they feel so close but apart at the same time.
The rule says no but they both say yes.
The price to pay is as heavy as stone.
How could something forbidden be so sweet.
.....
A cough escaped her lips and she used her palm to cover her mouth. Why was it so painful?
"What's wrong?" Lucas asked worriedly.
She removed her palm to respond but gasped at the sight of blood that stained it. She coughed again and more blood spilled from her mouth.
"Lisa!" Lucas hurriedly stood up and tapped her cheeks. She was losing consciousness.
"Lucas, it hurts." She groaned and coughed out more blood. She tried keeping her eyes open but she could barely see a thing. Everything was spinning continually and Lucas's voice
was becoming distant.
Lucas immediately searched around the room for what was making her throw up blood and his eyes spotted the food.
His eyes changed completely from blue to red when he realised what happened.
'She was poisoned!.' He gritted his teeth and scooped Lisa into his arms, teleporting to his room and laying her on the bed.
"Lucas.." She groaned, her beautiful face contorted in pain. Green veins bulged under her skin and she creased her forehead.
"I'm coming Lisa, please stay with me." He whispered softly as he rammed his head for a cure. He contacted his friend Theodore telepathically and he appeared.
"Gather all the maids in the palace and take them to the dining." Theodore nodded and disappeared soon after.
After which, Lucas climbed on the bed and stared at Lisa hesitantly.
There was only one way to save her and he knew she would flip if she woke up.
Leaning in, he placed his lips gently on hers.
..........
Lucas was a guardian. He had done his job many times cleanly with efficiency and didn't have to worry about anything not until he was assigned to her.
He couldn't stay in the same space with her without wanting to touch her.
He couldn't just get enough of her doe like eyes that tried to challenge him everytime.
He more than ever wanted to change the rules now. He suddenly felt himself getting attracted to her in every way possible and he hated it.
This was his job and the repercussions of him doing anything else than guarding her was going to harm them both.
Despite him knowing that he still took that step. A step he knew that would cost her him. Whatever was going to happen, he will allow as long as it doesn't touches her.
Ever.
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Écrire un avisWow This is awesome. I'm quite surprised this is a new book yet the beginning is so sweet.I wonder what is going on between That ghost guy and Lisa.Keep it up author we love you 😍😍
I really love everything about this book. If you are looking for mystery and forbidden romance, this is the book. I can't stop reading this beautiful creation
nice work stability and writing quality is amazing i hope you will rise more. and character design i don’t get in chapter 1 i hope in others chapter it explained. but it amazing story keep up🥰🥰
This story is awesome I already knew it would be good just by reading the prologue. I recommend this book go baby girl ❤️😍😍
I love the storyline, and the characters are sooo relatable. The book is overall really nice 👍❤️
This is an amazing book. Couldn't stop reading . if you are looking for romance and extreme mystery ,this is your book
At first I thought this would be a horror book but I was wrong the romance between two of them just feels like they actually exist
review from other readers really encouraged new readers like us to read a book. I think I will grand myself an opportunity by reading this fantastic book.
I'll be honest, the plot of this story is interesting. The characters have emotions and you can connect with them. The only thing holding you back as an author, is punctuation. Adding a comma can make all the difference. "Alex !, What are you doing," Versus "Alex ! What are you doing" Using AI such as ChatGPT to just edit your chapters can be a huge help too.
Of course all of you are welcome 🤗 and I hope we readers can bond together to read our awesome author's book!
The story had many problems and one of them is charecter designs The charecters in the cover of novel are Lisa and Lucas, Lisa's one is okay but about Lucas I cannot began to imagine him looking like takemichi from Tokyo revengers.Another one is slow progression, the story is not fast paced for sure, not too slow, the fist few chapters were Hella slow them it began it's pacing.Sometimes I didn't even know where the story is going, like yeah.And also the main factor the snyposis doesn't conjures my interest, the reason is the author even if you don't put the depth just put a simply design of the story.And last but not least ,it is itself me, I don't like this kinds of stories, because I am kind of in adventure stories so yeah Their are good pints but I just wanted to say the flaws because good points are all over And also a suggestion author, you should have long type reviews, it will help many peoples.
after bingeing 20 chapters of this novel i can confidently say that this has the potential to be big, i liked how the story went, i thought it was just gonna be a paranormal romance but i was completely wrong, i liked the characters alot especially the "special scenes" heh, i would say this is a good recommendation to romance lovers out there, i hope it improve more as time goes, also good cover choice!
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As they say,never judge a book by its cover,this may just be a new book but step by step it will outshine others.watch out readers Two Worlds Apart: The forbidden love is coming