Trial: A B1 battle droid

LV 4

Jacob_Harding

it's a story, alright. I mean, I think it's a new author, so it's to be expected I do believe he'll be going back through his chapters and editing them so this review will be faulty sooner or later but eh might as well. fine story grammar, not the best spelling mistakes often. Story development is ok it gets confusing at times, but you figure it out. I'm the next chapter. character design is fine. I haven't had much of an issue with it besides not knowing who's talking. updating is very often no complaints there. world background is ok could be better, but it's enough to pass by it without much of an issue. so yea, in general, I give it a 3.6 because of it being a new author who will hopefully go back through and edit their chapters. (Good luck, author, and sorry for all the comments in the chapters, lol)