Travelling the Heavens

LV 3

SecretWolf

I have read 200+ Chapter and I think it is time to make a review. The story has many positives and few negatives. Honestly I would have not read it, had there been tragedy tag,(Since plot is around that I think that should be here) Just a warning to those who dislike tragedies. Other then the tragic parts of the story is quite decent and the writing is top quality and it is worth a read, Writing Quality 5 Stability of Updates 5 (It is 95 percent consistent) Story Development 4 (The development of story is very slow and a few places where I decided to skip - due to personal preference and missing tag) Character Design 3 (While most of the time characters are well made, there are inconsistency and lack of explanation for certain actions by these characters in key instances in the plot. They seem illogical and perhaps a glimpse into there thought process and reasoning would clarify it. ) World Background 4 (The world building is a strong aspect of the novel, but in the initial phase of the novel some power structure, path and skills were unclear. The most noticeable was power structures) Overall 4.2 While I have given the long review highlighting areas that it could improve, I can say that there is a lot of effort put into this novel and quite high in comparison to most novel in here. The biggest short-coming for me is the tragedies that chained together and response of people in those times. Otherwise it is a definitely a good read and it will not disappoint.

LV 4

amaturewriter

This bk is dope but the crossdressing [ CD ] shit is not dope. other than that its interesting and whilst it has the cultivation clichés, it inst boring nor too stupid. though the CD, cause its kinda part of the plot

LV 11

NaTaS_2951

Good world building. No face slapping interesting eye power for mc not so overbearing of a cheat in form of library I would say a great novel but a overuse of crossdressing humor is making me rate it much worse and I hope it will soon die out for no one to remeber it

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LV 1

Kenringdomstorys

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LV 11

SopitaCx

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LV 1

Zer0s

For Volume 1: So yeah, the first volume is mostly on character development and world building so the pace is slow. Honestly, I think most casual people will enjoy it more once it probably gets into the next volume and since the main plot only comes out in volume 2, if you just want amazing action and overpowered moments just wait for volume 2. You'll miss background information on the characters, but I'll repeat anything that's important.

LV 4

Daoist7847765

it is a good story. i hope that the author will not drop it....................................................................................................................................................................................