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Synopsis
In most novels, the MC is stupid, thoughtless, and his plot armor is way too powerful.
I'll try to do something different here.
Having lived a life of suffering and mental torture his entire first life, he will do his best to gain as much freedom as possible.
The MC will be careful, manipulative and intelligent. We will follow his journey to freedom.
Hey! This is the first time that I write something.
English is not my first language, so I apologize for any grammatical errors I haven't seen.
I await your feedback. I am open to all constructive criticism.
Good reading :)
This incredible thumbnail is by this guy.
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UChdC718_Kndnuc5I7sh8_Q/featured
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DISCLAIMER
Art is not mine and only the OC’s in the fanfic are my creations
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Écrire un avisWarning this is extremely AU But if you still want to read just know the development makes no sense and you'd go from hero academia to hunger games real quick. If author makes it work later on fair enough but so far yikes. The main character isn't even interesting. The synopsis or other reviews would sell you the idea it's good but after reading your disappointment would be immeasurable. The story line even worse you hardly care about what's happening. you just feel oh that happened this happened hardly anything exciting.
So, for those who want review before reading then I just have one thing to say, MC is same as shown in the cover above. I mean pathetic and villainous. Just know one thing, He goes to fight villian and almost dies but let them leave and live. But, Our MC wants to kill students when they say something about him. Like seriously?? So, basically MC is kind of guy who lets villian live while wants to kill children who has better skills. This is the whole story.
There is not much I can comment, the only thing I can say is ... INCREDIBLE !, good story. I ask you to consider the option to use Hawkeye's abilities (MCU with the bow and arrows) when using the advantage of vision when aiming and electromagnetic forces when redirecting arrows. It would be amazing
this story is just great i have nothing else to add ......................................................................................................................................................................................................
I got baited with the promise of an evil, loner MC. He is the exact opposite of those two traits, take that as you will. For me it was a disappointment, and any fellow evil protagonist enjoyers would be wise to skip this novel.
it was really good until the whole kidnapped crazy people survival thing happened and turned me off the story. don't need all the extra unrealistic plot
Spoiler de révélationThe plot is great. I like how the mc thinking.:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
The novel until now is simply (can't land on a specific word).A fic with a unique plot in all the MHA FF's I've read. The direction now it's going is the most unique one yet. The character of the Mc is manipulative and cunning but still having a small character growth. And it has almost all the things I would like in fanfic. Great plot Smart Mc potential power, not op ones. Unique development Character interactions The only thing I'm not satisfied with is updates. Aside from that, it is a must-read.
The novel is quite good, but sometimes MC makes quite questionable choices like 1) in a world with ton of useless quirks he decides to get an object attraction quirk assuming that it is just untrained telekinesis(or even smth stronger) and then merges with it without any proper testing 2) he picks Momo's Creation quirk for emergency situation instead of Kurogiri's Warp gate
DUE TO THE REALISTIC AND SERIOUS MC THAT DONT JOKE AROUND I WAS CAPTIVATED!!!. I just want MORE CHAPTERS. THEN I WILL GIVE THIS A 6 STAR the god of stars. Do we have a deal?
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WARNING: I ignore the comment not knowing op meant and went ahead and i regret it. Everything was going fine until USJ incident but after that 2 students die and mc whole class get kidnap by mysterious villain who wipe out a country for fun and make them play hunger game like death game to save japan. After that everything went crazy, nothing makes sense and author try to make up some bs but the story quality drop so much that he had to drop the whole novel since there was no way to salvage it. Stay away pls. 2/5 coz author deleting 1/5 ratings
If you haven't read this you don't understand how amazing this is. I read it while it was still being updated, and I'm hoping that the author comes back.
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Spoiler de révélationThe MC is very smort, likeable, never out of character currently, and what you would expect when a sociopath was reborn in MHA so yeah very great
great chapter 👌 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌 by the author .,............................................
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Spoiler de révélationAbsolutely Great. MC is on the Manipulation, and Villainous side but the fact of that he will do almost anything to keep moving forward is a plus. Only problem would be how they went from UA high school to a Hunger Game very quickly and there's wasn't even any build up but not that it matter since the Hunger Game show what of menace can the MC be
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An ABSOULUTELY PHENOMINAL story-few people can actually develop a story that has a MC that actually manipulates or kills people as long as it benefits himself but what most of those novels degrade into is just psychotic behavior instead of being a sociopath they become a psychopath but this novel perfectly outs into perspective a MC that knows how to manipulate and lie to people perfectly and the author perfectly delivers on the story with that archetype.....One of the best MHA fanfictions out there right now that has a unique plot.