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TimeTravel--Multiverse
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Hey Everyone! You want to read a story about Time tarvel. Here you have an amazing stories like series... Come on!!
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Hello writer! I am Lily from Russia. Can't able to express my happiness after reading your series one by part. This is the first time reading such a excellent story in my life. Your creativity is so good. And all the best for your future. And have you written any other stories with this?
This story desperately needs to be proofread. I apologise for my harshness but this story would be so much better if it was in readable English. Maybe ask a friend to proofread before posting?
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supercalifragilisticexpialidocious,the thought is very unique and very easy to understand and read, expecting many more like this,all the best👍👍👍
The history is going well even tough it could be a bounch better, you are making a history using time travel as one of your principal tools to tell the history and to make it move on, so you gotta be becareful in the desitions you take because if you make a mistake the whole history is going down, the charaters are good altougth you could develope them better than they currently are and one suggestion change the names of Alex and alexa to another ones it made me get confuse while reading the history change their names to something different because the main charaters from the other universe are named Alex too so it is confuse. I didn't get clearly who is jack I felt it a little bit forced when he showed up so I suggest you develope that character better before continue the history and let me tell you something your history has so much potential so if you do it right with good plot twist and taking advantage of your characters at all you'd make a really good history.
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Hey hi. This is Jack from US. This is the first time reading such a awesome story. I have a question dude. How did you got such a wonderful idea? Really great. Detective in time travel. Sounds really great. Cool dude. And waiting for your next part. Be strong....
Wow, really amazing story you are doing. Keep it up. Eagerly waiting for your next part. Good content. Good concept. Really amazing. No words after reading your story one by one. All the best for your future. Stay strong....
One of the amazing and easy understable story which is going to be think about it, which is going to be confuse you alot. It is one of my best and amazing story in my life. Come on guys, have a look at this story and tell me your opinion on this. This series going to make life changeable. Come on!!
Hi Dude. Robert from Italy. First time reading story related Detective in Time machine. Good thinking. Good work. How did you got this idea? Eagerly waiting for your answer for this question. I support your work. Good job. Waiting for your next part.....