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There is a girl I love, beyond measure, her name whispered in my every prayer. I sacrificed everything for her, and now I depart, my final act dedicated to her.
In a realm beyond this life, if our souls should meet once more I pray earnestly for one thing—may the Divine decree that we never again walk the same path.
Then why?
“Excuse me? If you're done, can I use the tap?”
Why did our path across again?
If our fate was predetermined, why had I been granted this second chance?
Why!?
Why was I transported back to the past!?
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Looks nice based on the first initial chapters, really looking forward to continuing it
(I haven't read it) I'm curious about the relationship between the characters
Very poetic at the beginning, but poetry confuses me sometimes. The wording in their relationship is confusing at times cause in chap 1 it sounds like their strangers/one-sided love, then in chap 2 it sounds like their estranged lovers, then in 3 it’s back to one/sided love. So far character descriptions aren’t really present, but I haven’t read too far and the main plot is still kinda being set, so forgiven. Good luck, and nice start.
the story of I think it would be better story the story is very simple not
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So far not so bad I feel parts are just jumping or missing something but still nice
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