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The yellow flash of jujutsu high
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Keitaro was your typical high school student,atleast it looks like that as Keitaro had a secret, he could see supernatural things that other couldnt,those creatures made of negative curse energy, he wonders what they might be until one day fate came and call his name, follow him on his journey and watch as he become the yellow flash of jujutsu high.
A/N…none of the characters are mine except for the OC.
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I can't believe I didn't get first review someone beat me to it…somehow.. Anyway this story does use Gemini ai thought unlike the last story this time it's mainly used to do descriptions I can't really do yet and the dialogues along with how they interact were written by me.
This is a good one among jjk's fanfic that i've seen tbh, but our guy really about to become a binding vow merchant😂😂
Writing Quality 5/5 Stability of Updates 5/5 Story Development 1/5 because I can't give 0(ZERO) marks Character Design 1/5 World Background 3/5 jujutsu world in the beginning but something original after. I wanted to say that initially, it was a jujutsu kaisen fanfic. Still, after the MC lost 2 out of 2 fights with Gojo Satoru the author lost the ties of the story and turned it into an original shounem fanfic with original characters that are not part of the original jujutsu kaisen manga/anime. He only left the use of cursed energy within this fanfic. If you want an OP MC with the skills, experience, and intelligence equal to Namikaze Minato along with Gojo Satoru then this fic is not for you and not for anyone who wants a jujutsu kaisen fic with an original MC.
I really liked the story, but we do have to be critical; I would say that there is a lot of dialogue but little action, I want to give my opinion if the author is willing, and I wish Kenjaku was more dangerous than Hera in the original, he was a waste of a villain and died in a very pathetic way, I also want to advise you that they add a new villain at Sukuna's level, I say this because Minato and Gojo would end Sukuna like taking candy from a child and it would be very boring; and that's all my opinion and my review, I really liked it, I expect great things from this story, thank you. ahh another thing, put another shinigami for the MC that is for battle or defense, I would like that a lot 🤧
It's going to be honest with you author. The out of country arc is wayyy too long. we don't really care about it. we just want to see canon already. make a large time skip pls. we want to see jjk, not minato traveling the world.
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Its actually really good[img=nervous]...................................................................................................................
I haven't read this yet, but I like the concept, so keep going guys....please don't go on hiatus , that's all, but because writing a review can't be less than 140 words, so I'll write anything
Its actually really good, excellent use of AI. i don't even notice that I really like this story the only down side is that there aren't enough chapters
I can't believe I didn't get first review someone beat me to it…somehow.. Anyway this story does use Gemini ai thought unlike the last story this time it's mainly used to do descriptions I can't really do yet and the dialogues along with how they interact were written by me.
Sometimes I lose the point of the story. I even now really don't understand how he can spar with Gojo on equal. His technique is piece of shit. Speed, ah. C'mon you need to bypass infinity without DA and binding vows. Oh, rasengan, kirin, katon justu. Geez.. Your MC is really in main character with plot armor.
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I mean there’s nothing spectacular about it but the author should proofread his chaps and idk but it i dont tjink english is his main language
i had fun reading it so full 5 stars for me. it has interesting insight what might happen outside japan jujutsu world. sorry for not being able to provide useful criticism🙏 keep the good work author 👍 can't wait for the next chapter
This is kinda trash I’m ngl, the grammar is horrible (borderline unreadable) the story feels very robotic and emotionless