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The Whispers of a Yandere

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Auteur: Noi2002

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Synopsis

Sora Arashi; a lonely and love-deprived teenager. Walks a tightrope between despair and hope. Orphaned at a young age, he lives with his uncle’s abusive family enduring constant neglect. Sora finds solace in books, particularly those containing “Yanderes”. He yearns for a connection so intense, that not even death could severe it.

So, will Sora find what he intensely yearns for, or will he succumb to the overwhelming urge to just disappear?

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This is my first ever novel, so please do go easy on me. I am not very confident in my writing, but hope you guys like it. English isn't my native language, so I sometimes have used AI to make it sound better, but be sure the idea or base isn't taken by AI, just some of the wording. So I hope you guys can excuse that.

The novel concept won't be something revolutionary, just your average wish fulfilment novel you can say. It can be read as a good time pass. It will be cliche but I will try my best to upload quality content.

The cover is AI-made. Credit to my friend Odayaka. Be sure to check his novels out (Much better than mine) https://www.webnovel.com/profile/4320077764

Constructive criticism is very welcome.

I will try to release every 2 to 3 days.

My discord: https://discord.gg/eDaKPehNf5

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Noi2002

Shameless author dropping a 5-star review here! This is my first time ever writing, so I hope this isn't too bad. English isn't my native language so do tell me if you find any errors! And I appreciate it, if you guys could leave an honest review! I hope you guys enjoy this, and that I am able to make your day a tiny bit better, thanks!

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deicide_diablo

Ok, just finished reading 19 chapters today after finding this novel, though currently there are 25 chapters available in this novel. And i think i have read enough to write a review. let's talk about the story first. It had a very soft pace—I mean, it was not fast nor slow. The author did a good job narrating the story and maintaining a consistent pace throughout.(making it difficult for me to believe that this is the author's first novel). I also found no problems with the writing/translation quality. If you have read the synopsis, this story delivered exactly what you would expecte without any lack. So read the synopsis carefully, if you are very picky with what novel you read (I am extremely picky regarding this). The author removed unnecessary details from the novel, allowing the story to flow smoothly. it also has some mystery elements, some maybe dark? The author did a good job developing the personalities of the male and female characters up to this point in the chapter. This novel has promising potential for a light novel. Of course, this is not a 500+ chapter novel, but rather a short story with a good plot. Now enough of the positive review.. Now the reason why I am dropping it. If you have read the synopsis, you will have a hunch about the MC's potential to become a yandere, which I believe is a possible character development. And this is what I find uninteresting. Seeing both leads go crazy at each other is not fun for me. Anyway, I recommend that you try reading this novel. You will undoubtedly get hooked. Reading this book made me think of another book, Behind the Screen, which is the only yandere book I have ever finished.

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