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After being killed in a robbery that went wrong. Mike finds himself in another world, but he doesn't despair about his death. Hell, he almost cried out of joy, he didn't have any family or friends, so he didn't care about leaving his world or missing anything because the world itself was so super boring for him .
To reach the pinnacle of all and get rid of all the shackles that bound him, in his past life. Thus, Mike started his journey with a clear goal in his head and a calm heart.
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No romance cause it won't be fitting this story.
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For the moment I'm thinking about 1 chapter each day but it might change to 2 each day or even 0 in some days.
The cover used isn't mine, so if you are the owner and want me to change it simply write a comment on my last chapter.
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Honestly I haven't read the story yet but I saw in the description that there was no romance. The fact that there is no romance and it is stated in the description and guaranteed deserves a five star review in and of itself. The yell of excitement I give when I saw that was hilarious. The amount of times I've had to stop reading a good story because they introduce romance makes me weep. So thank you Author. I dont start a story until at least fifty chapters but for this story I'm going to break that rule. I'll right another review when I catch up with the story.
Evil mc 😈 Love an mc who is loyal to his goals and motivations and is rational in an immortal with a balance of ruthlessness and merciless nature love it author.
I must say good story though I haven’t reached far yet. The story so far has been alright the mc fits the tittle villain but the only downside I have is that it doesn’t give off a dark novel feel but apart from that it good
The book is intriguing primarily because of the villainous trait of the main character. Not too thrilled about the beginning but deciding to give the future chapters a chance didn't disappoint. Everyone's happy cuz there's no romance, geez. This part ticked me off at first. Okay, I'm a fan of romance but I noticed that with the present storyline, including romance would ruin everything. Where would you even add it? It would only give Mike a weakness and I'm pretty sure that's the last thing ve needs right now. However, I expect less robotic side characters. World building is excellent but what brought down the ratings from 5.0 is the lacking character design and unstable writing quality. Poor at the beginning but gets better as the story progresses.
Overall and good points: So far, it is the typical transmigration story with a system. It is however, not a revenge story and the aim for now is to survive. The background setting is quite interesting family wise. On top of that, the content is quite easy to comprehend. Nevertheless, what makes this story interesting is unique and unexpected antagonists and plot changes- the silver lining of this book. The thing about this book that I really appreciate is the presence of intrigue and calculations on what could have happened and why things happen. A sort of human behavior prediction. Cons: It is hard to call the style as outstanding, not to mention triggering curiosity is rather hard in beginning chapters. Character could be more developed, there is a lot of wasted potential, especially with what happened to bell, whilst the unexpectedness is quite entertaining, I see an ark wasted. Also, the dialogues make it hard to immerse fully as they sound as though taken from a modern setting and a bit bland or too explanatory. Another thing that turned me off, was how easy the character gained points. There should be a more gripping, heart throbbing journey. Maybe because it’s the beginning, I can’t seem to get excited. Additionally, other than the mc journey being too easy is the lack of any sort of moral compass. I can’t see the difference between the mc and scum. Adding this after reading chapter 8, but I really cannot see cliff hangers and conflicts get resolved too easily. It’s like the ark ended before it began. Advice : Perhaps, add more flavor to the character such as stoic, lively, cold, passionate, devious, scheming etc. i know it is a character setting on its own but the mc seems bland. And add more conjunctions and sentence structure variation so the readers doesn’t get bored. Stop wasting arks and plot points. Also, this one is probably me, but I am really tired of demon gods.
great novel so far. I hope the author doesn't change his way of writing or place characters recklessly. All in all, a beautiful novel that I will follow.
Being the first work of the author, I must say I am highly impressed. The world building and character design went beyond my expectations. A very good book to be precise.
Everything about the book is good, i love reading it and the minutes used were not wasted. I’ll encourage everyone who love reading system and cultivation books to read this one[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
To be honest ill be rating this work for various reasons . The first being that this is the Author's first book and yet the story is solid and i didn't find any loopholes till now. The english is decent and not many grammar mistakes exist which really shows how much thought and hard work the author is putting into this novel and he doesnt even have an editor and he isnt even contracted yet. The last point is that this story isnt predictable at all . Keep up the good work and ill be following this work when it gets more chapters.
For those that enjoy novels with system then this novel jumps right into the action. The pacing is good and the world building shows that the writer put a lot of thought and effort into it. The updates are stable and I look forwards to the next chapters to see what else we will discover. Even though some explanations seem a bit sparse for my taste at first. The more you read everything starts to come together as the story progresses, keep on writing and all the best!
I'm loving what I am reading so far. The story is intriguing and I was captivated by it. This is the second book about a system that I have read, and it's really good. I can't wait to keep on reading to see how the character progresses. Keep up the good work.
Keep up the good work choka! I love your main character personality! Plus it’s Isekai world! you better finish up this story and give us a great ending!
I loveee action and magic stories.🎃it gives me peace🕊️ like I am in their world.......Author has done great work hope she / he get more fame❤️🩹❤️🩹 keep it up...... It's an amazing book!!!!! 😍❤️
The story is well written, the plot intriguing, and the story has potential. keep up the good work, I enjoyed reading your story and hope to see more in the coming updates
I love where this is going , keep on writing this novel have a pretty good potential and ill be following this till the end . Just dont make mc soft and a good guy saving everyone.
Good work author I really like villain stories and this didn't disappoint very nice work I recommend it and author keep up the good work 👌 well done
"I read until chapter 27, so here's my review: the writing quality is okay if you are a beginner reader. The story development was okay but not really unique, as it resembles more of a cultivation world (where characters kill and become stronger until the end). Our character's thinking is on track and fully developed, so you won't be bothered if the main character is dumb or makes silly mistakes. Anyway, the overall performance of the writing is good. The world background was also explained in detail."
the writing is pretty bad.. some mistakes and author uses abbreviations a lot.. he uses "ofc" instead of "of course" and "cause" instead of "because" which are not good english.. it's okay to use in spoken english but not in written english.. especially in a novel.
if i can give more star to world 🌎 background i would the novel is great over all
This is a story that will be almost daily updated, and it will be more frequently updated if it's liked. I won't say much because you can check yourself whether you like the story or not. Any comments, thoughts, ideas and complaints are more than welcome. Don't forget to add this book to your library and hit that power stone button.