Synopsis
The protagonist is killed by his parent.
After dying he gets reincarnated with an upgrade system that upgrades anything related to him.
To get his revenge on his 'parents' he upgrades the talent that killed him, into something with limitless growth rate.
"Goes in other animes"
My reasons for why you shouldn't read the story.
I'm not good at writing so don't bother about this story if you want top quality novel.
English is my second language
I post the moment i finish the story
I write whatever comes to my mind when i write a chapter.
I'm 14 years old
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I feel sad cause I 5 stared my own work Any ways, I just started to write this story as a hobby. I will try to write 1 chapter a day with everything I got. This story will have the worst writing ever, cause I’m not good at writing.
I donno why this work is so low in the charts although it is good work(wont say the best but still good and deserves better)... until you get a good ranking SPIRIT stones from all of my accounts will go to you... PERSONAL SUGGESTION: The site lacks "committed-to-a-single-woman" type of novels and yours have the potential to fit in very well!!! the work should go A LITTLE "above 18" rather than "for general audiences"(a pinch of romance for taste and didn't mean a smut)... GooD LucK!!
This had potential.. BUT its all pretty much run out now!!! used to be one of my favs but slow updates n plain story made me change my mind!! pros: no cliches cons: If ATLEAST cliches were present it wouldnt've been so boring I know the author is kid and you write at the free time, but just wanted to give an honest review!! you are just 14 and already writing novels that require parental guidance?!! HAHA... AWESOME if guys like us have a club , you are welcome!!
Can u change it from 1st perspective to 3rd? I add in the library for now.. Hope it will changed later.. If not.. Then too bad.. I just dont get used for story with 1st perspective..
Not even half way through chapter 1 and get sweating. "Sh**" " F***ing"... A14 y/o writing should be supported and encouraged to express creativity. Oh well. This may have an interesting story. I'll never know.
Nice plotline but storyline not smooth enough. As a reader story feel like skip a little while reading. Too many time skip ruin the story, MC just suddenly get strong. And Im not feel excited even MC score highest in entrance.
I'm too lazy to Weber review almost stories but I actually took the time out my day to write this review I read it it too cuz it is good amazing good great also better cool heavenly Godly
there are many beginners who make a very good novel however they give up. I hope you do not give up on this novel because it's very good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Please check the numbers tally in chapter 14. From 50,000 cycle on the first day to 6000 cycles after 9 days. ...................................
GoGOGOGO!!!!!!!!!!!!!;;}:-:]*];-:&-:- DAMN*T Good luck🙋🙋🙋🙋👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Good story that's enjoyable to read. While the grammar has its ups and downs if u can get past i highly recommend reading as its a fun story that's enjoyable
I like the idea of the guy with the hacking thing but i think you should boost out this until gets to a hundred chapter or get some chapters ready to upload before you focus on another book. Btw i like the book and can he please go to Naruto world next because i know nothing about bleach but i know alot about Naruto.
I really liked the beginning but even an overpowered mc has to have a dynamic in his reasoning. I really lost my "appetite" when he just started to kill those sects. I think you should erase those chapters and go back to the storyline before. Being overpowered or just having no sense for humility is not the same. Seems you thought posting is more important than writing a good idea. Maybe get some proofreaders who can tell you when it gets boring.
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Good story of an op mc suggestion plz go to fairy tail😭and get together with Mirajane plz also Hinayana from Naruto and Elizabeth from seven deadly sins
think it is a good idea but please don't make harem stored in I think he should go to hunter x hunter or bleach or DBL in food luck my friend
Spoiler de révélation New era for wn new approaches with classics to those who says it's too unique flame! Flame! Support to author . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . So what now?
This story is good and the grammatical mistakes aren't so big or often enough to get annoying but the numbers the author tend to use seem very exaggerated. The MC also leveled up relatively slowly at first but in like 6 chapters is suddenly top of first realm so that accelerated pretty quickly. But that's about all keep up with the good work author. 👍👍👍
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IN A NUT: MC, who was abandoned at birth and later killed by his own parents, gets reborn as a PRINCE who has nothing but a small home. a caring wife AND A SYSTEM!!!, which helps him upgrade almost anything about him! Apart from the SIDE QUEST: FIND ALL THE GRAMMAR & SPELLING MISTAKES that pops up in your mind, when you read each & every line, you cannot find any fault with this work...