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The Ultimate Host

奇幻 1,726 Chapitres 3.0M Affichage
Auteur: NOAHPOWELL233

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One fateful encounter with an extraterrestrial being leaves a man named Cross with inhuman powers and abilities. What will Cross do when he finds out international criminal organizations and government agencies want to dissect him and use the powers of the being for their own evil use? Join the adventure!!!!!!!!!!

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Jixyakku

Honestly this book is really good, has amazing potential and just hits the spot on some of my desires when imagining this genre. I hope that at some point you will go back and edit your work in the early chapters because before chapter 300 it takes an incredible amount of effort to push through the pain of the grammar and flow of the story to get that far. Otherwise, an amazing story and with a few touch ups could have a huge fanbase unfortunately those early chapters completely stonewall general readers. Good Luck with your work in the future.

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Insane_Pumpkin

I read few chapters at this looks like a great novel in need of a great editor. Story is great but gramar is from a nightmare like place so author please get a editor for this novel and with his help do a rewrite it would make this novel get 10 times the readers it has now.

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Feebling

The story is interesting and has a lot of potential, yet I've decided to drop it since the Grammar is seriously REALLY BAD. Shame. - Writing quality 1 star.

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japprentice

It was empty. I couldn't stop myself.😁☺️☺️☺️. The syno**is didn't attract me. It's not just my cup of tea. But it doesn't mean others should not read it. Try and You might be surprised, who knows. So 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔 I have nothing more 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅

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Dragon5162

Grammer is crap, pure utter crap!!!!! Whoever wrote should seriously look up some programs to help at the very least. I honestly cant even get past the first chapter without just giving up on this novel.

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SoBreez1

Pretty good but not the best. (Wuhsndudhdbfbdufbfbfjgighfbfbdhdhfbfbfhfufbfbdhdhrbrbrjfjfhfhfbfhfhfhfbfbfhfhfrbdhxhxvdvdhdjdnrbfhdhdhdbdhdhdh)

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Carla_Ann_Powell

Great story. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😂😁😁😁😁😁😂😂😂😂😂😁😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😁😁😂😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😁😁😂😂😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

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martialgod1125

Good story intriguing has lots of potential just need to go back and fix all of the early chapters looking forward to see the completed story good luck👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

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SamarasBox

🙌 Mad respect cuz keep doing your thing story is 👍🔥 just need some characters designs and a world background but overall story has a lot of potential.

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Kasaix
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😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

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Henrique_Paiao

Exp 😉😎🤔😙😎😙😎😙😎😙😎😙😎😙😎😙😎😙😎😙😎😙😎😙😎😙😎😙😎😙😎😙😎😙🤣😘😆😄😙😃😘😉😎😉😋😊😉😎😙😋🤔😆😋😍😙🤣😉🤣😊😗😜😙😪🤐😺👦👦😪🤐😺😪😌😜😣😛😪😔😫😔😮😪🤐👧🤐😜😜😜😎😄😍🙂😄😙🤣😉😎😗😃😅😀☺️😀😆😚😀 ☺️😀

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Kevin_Rodriquez

Good story 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄

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Kevin_Rodriquez

Great story. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍕🍠🍠😉😴😉🍕😉😴😉😲🍳😴🍳😴🍳😲🍳😲🍳🍦😀😴🍳😴🍳😲🍳🍳😴😴🍳😲😉😲😉😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀🍦😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😂🇺🇸😲🇺🇸😲🏡😲🏡😲🏡😲🇺🇸🏡😲🏡😲🇺🇸😂🇺🇸😲🇯🇵😲😪😲🇯🇵😂😴💩🇰🇷😲

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Heather_Powell_7217

😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😀😀😀😀😈😊😈😊😇😊😂😊😈😅😈😊😈😅😈😅😈😅😈😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😀😀😀😁😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😂😀😀😀😂😀

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Kevin_Rodriquez

Very good😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😉😀😀😀😀😀😉😉😀😀😀😀😀😀😉😀😀😀😀😀😀😉😉😀😀😀😀😀love the fights in different realms this story has lots of potential need to fix the early chapters

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Carla_Ann_Powell

Awesome book. 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😁😁😁😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😁😁😁😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😁😆😆😆😆😆😆🙂😉😉☺😀😉😋😉😋😆😊😀😊😀☺😆😋😋😆😋😆😋😆☺😉☺😉☺😉😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😆😆☺😚😆😆😆☺😀😉☺😉☺😉☺😉☺😉☺😉☺😉😉

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