Synopsis
A young beautiful girl's life changed when she met the vampire prince of Silven she was hired to be his caretaker. Everyone thought she was just a normal street rag but little did they know that she was the lost princess of Margovia princess Octavia and the most powerful being to ever walk the earth.
Octavia had to put up with the prince for a long time and eventually fell in love with him or so she thought, the guy she fell in love with was not the crown prince but a shapeshifter by the name of Al. The princess faced many trials, betrayed by the ones she loved and trusted the most. Her life came to such a standpoint that she had to choose between life and death and darkness and light when the war for survival began. Unfortunately for everyone faith took a turn and she had a tragic end but was later reincarnated in an unknown world with far more danger.
"Will she be able to kill the evil that was resurrected when she was reborn?".
'Will she be able to live a normal life?
"Will she be able to find true love?"
"Will the girl fight faith and survive or will she meet another tragic end in this new world?.
Read to find out the princess's life story and what will happen in the future.
Disclaimer: cover is not mine I only edited it.
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Écrire un avisI really like the story, the premise, the characters and the start... also, the cover since I play her a lot xd. But overall, I would want to see more, great job author!
Nice start from the beginning, everything is explained well and in detail. I feel the story is interesting and makes you curious about what will happen next. So far I have read 4 chapters and it us going really well. I hope the author keep up the good work [img=recommend]
Your writing quality was superb! But what I can suggest was to break your paragraphs because it was too long. Your sentences have to be put an enter (↩️)in between so it will be pleasing to the eyes and easy to read. All in all, likeable characters. Engaging plot, Lively actions, vivid narrations and awesome plot progression! Kudos and Peace! ✌️ Also I will boost your views to 1 thousand! I hope this hel**!
the start was great, the description of the world was quite vivid. it was a good read the description of the character too was great enabling the reader to picture her perfectly in the minds eye
Wow😍 I found a gem. This story is really great. The chapters were so interesting and well described it hooked me till end. I know its too early to review, but, but, but, the author did a great job and deserved some praise. Hope to be consistent or improve more. Good luck!! [img=recommend]
The description is very clear and the choice of words used are beautiful, I have only read the first few chapters but the plot is quite interesting!
Your story deserves a five star for sure. Nice start from the beginning, everything is explained well and in detail. It is a a refreshing read, even the cover is attractive. Kudos to the author.
A refreshing read. A story about a young amazing innocent beautiful young girl. She was an orphan loved by all. She even captures the eyes of the royal family. The story has amazing descriptions and was easy to follow like a crystal clear spring flowing, that is how this good story is.
I liked how the story started off at the beginning of the chapter and it intrigued me to read further. The writing style is well written. Very promising characters. definitely recommended for reading. keep up the good work, author!
Wow I must commend this author Samayah Kassim and also she is an amazing kind wonderful and hardworking friend to me who books are been liked by myself Vanessa dowlatram I must say congratulations to her on this next amazing book can't wait for the next chapters to be released to be honest I don't usually read these types of books but I gave it a try and I must say this book meaning the writing quality and others need all 5 stars to the best and I must say to her that I wish her all the best in the future and may the perfection of hers prove who she are and may she keep shining and shining in writing these novels as days goes by good luck and her books are the beat books I have ever read in my life keep it up my friend from yours sincerely and truly friend Vanessa dowlatram........🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖
The story has great potential. haven't gone far , but it's still nice. [img=update] .............................................. every moment reading this book will make you ask for more from the author
At the start of the first chapter, the authors description made me feel like I was there. But sadly, it soon turned to someone telling me. Honestly, the author shouldn't only learn about descriptive writing but grammar and why you don't put too characters talking to one another in the same paragraph, other than that, it's fine. Recommended to new readers on the site.
*I stumbled upon this novel because it doesn't have any systems or magical thingies that *cough* scars Webnovel. I really like the concept and the first few parts of the story. However, (although I made the writing quality 5/5) it still has its improvements. I hope this would help your writing career. Pros: The author can beautifull describe the female character and the stories that would affect her. The concept is really great, and the background is rich. Cons: There are tons of descriptive texts. Although this might appear "showing" to others, but for me it looked like it was telling (especially the nose part and the life of the girl) (and I know that this information must be shared to readers, showing a scene where Octavia lives her life alone inside a orphanage instead of telling it. There is a few mixed and match tenses from here and there. But....that's a really difficult topic to learn.
A well-done story, surely. It has a fairy tale sort of vibe, which makes the world seem bright and beautiful. The characters are cute and lively. On the flip side, there are a number of structural errors, which the author very much improves upon in later chapters. To the author: Well done! Keep writing and polishing your technique!
A very beautiful Read indeed. The story flows and develops beautifully and in a very natural manner, where nothing seems forced or out of place. Well, the biggest issue here on WN is poor grammar, actually most of the people here don't have English as their first language, so they kind of suffer and makes us readers suffer with them too, but not with this story. The grammar is perfect. Well, there is always the room for improvement. I am really, really looking forward to Octavia's Journey ! 💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓
This is a wonderful story, I love the twists and it flows really well, the author is really creative, I wish you good luck author. keep up the good.
I like the way the author describes the characters. The plot is unique, and all the characters are interesting. I am looking forward to reading more. Added it to my library
A five-star review because of the way the emotions and incidents are depicted by the author along with the book cover and the involving storyline.....A book that introduces female strength and adventures... With a nice hint of romance to make the book overall, superb! Best of luck to both the author and the book!
OMG, I loved reading this book. It was amazing. From the plot to the descriptions of the setting to the twist and turns and trials the mc had to overcome. Good job, author.
After reading your book I will say you did a great job, your description and world background is great keep up the good work author cannot wait for the other chapters
Spoiler de révélationAuteur Darkswan
Great start author! Really enjoyable read so far, story flows and descriptions are creative and imaginative. Keep up the hard work author, I will look forward to your updates.