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The Rich Guy is cursed : Immortal Love
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"The Rich Guy is Cursed: Immortal Love" is a riveting suspense novel that delves into the extraordinary life of a young man with inexplicable powers, who must navigate the challenges of living among ordinary humans. As secrets and mysteries unravel, the story unfolds into a captivating exploration of love, immortality, and the enigmatic world that lies beneath the surface of the rich guy's seemingly charmed life.
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I too am looking forward to more updates! The writing is generally good in terms of its descriptions and dialogue, although sometimes things feel a bit repetitive. I also find the writing to be focused more on telling us things than showing them, especially in moments where we're initially introduced to characters and we're immediately told to think they're smart, beautiful, ect without seeing why we would think of them that way. Don't want to sound negative, those are only minor things I wanted to point out. That doesn't negate the fact that the character's you are introducing are interesting, and the grammar and sentence structuring is on point! Keep it up.
My only complaint is that the chapters are too short, I need moree. Love the way you write 🙇♀️
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