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THE PHANTOMS

Fantasía 24 Chapitres 13.2K Affichage
Auteur: Z_E_N_I_T_H_89

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It was just another day like any other in the city of Tokyo, citizens going about their daily lives, father's going to work to earn their keep, mother's cooking,the children playing,A fine Saturday indeed, everything was perfect.

That was until the very sky became as dark as a stormy night,within seconds the sky of Tokyo city became engulfed with what seemed like a supernatural flame of crimson black.
While everyone was still in awe of this sight, large creatures where summoned to eat the humans,It was a gruesome sight,no one could fathom what was going on, what those creatures where,and why they had to die that day.
The once great and mighty Tokyo has now been lost.
Will maestro and his crew be able to stop their adversaries and bring back Tokyo to it's former Glory?.

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KBKayboy

the story is quite good but i have an issue with the story changing from one scene to another rapidly, it makes it quite hard to follow. i hope you make adjustments soon

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Lucid1dreams

it 's very good and interesting please continue

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