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The Night Rose
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Pirates. They bring havoc and death wherever they go. They steal from those who are not able to defend themselves and left innocents dead. They are a group of lawless individuals that are considered as thorns of the sea.
But what if within these groups of lawless thorns hides a rose? A rose that ended up to a remote continent that is considered as a prison?
Will she be able to continue living while still pretending to be a man?
Or will she need to use her female charms to survive?
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Interesting start for a cross dressing novel. It makes me look forward for both the past and future of the MC. Good luck author san! I will look forward for lots of chapters!
I have read six chapters so far. Based on my observation, I love the word background, it is described profoundly, that readers like me could easily imagine every scenario taking place. It is a nice book, with a very interesting plot. 5/5!!! Keep up the good work author!!!
Interesting story line. I am looking forward to this crossdressing pirate. I am just in the beginning of the novel. Not much chapters yet so I want to see more chapters before I start reading. The first chapter is enough to catch my attention though. So added to collection and help the author review. Keep it up author-sama! Make sure to have an ending and lost of chapter to go.
Minor spelling errors as well as grammar but nothing that majorly interrupts the flow of the story hasn't really been going long enough to have much character development as it's been mainly showing of the city and new characters of the place she's been dumped into but i think if It keeps going it could be a really good novel. Keep up the good work author =)
I think the story is very interesting so far. The plot is developing nicely, and the world building doesn't overwhelm the reader. One point I'd like to mention that you can improve is the dialogue. The dialogue doesn't feel realistic at times. For example: "We will hear your condition, but I cannot promise that we will fulfill all of it" Think to yourself-- is this something an army leader would say when facing a bunch of pirates who are about to lose? So politely? Not even normal people speak this way. In addition, I found another reoccurring problem: you use speech tags way too much, and the same ones as well. For example: Talfen shouted back. The leader answered Talfen answered. The above was taken from a single conversation. Besides grammar mistakes / past present tense mistakes, there are no other problems that have come to my attention. Keep writing, and good luck, author! :)
It is just the beginning of the story but I already enjoyed it. I looked forward to the Female Leads adventures. I am still looking forward who the male lead is. More chapters to go. Good luck author-san!
I've chosen this novel in particular since it's been so long since I've read a book about pirates. I really love how you builded up the story. It was very compelling to read right off the bat with just the first chapter. I hope to read more backstory about Arwin though.
This is Brandon Gould the writter of the Tylingariea Epic i am responding to a Review Swap that i asked for. here is my review Of the chapters i have read i am enjoying this book, it seems like a intresting steampunk fantasy romance book. I normaly do not read romance books i do enjoy fantasy and Steampunk, the pirates aspect of it also is intresting. the writting is good as well as the descrive parts and the chartors from what i can tell so far. all and all when i get a chance to i will most defenclty read more of this story
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I liked the premise but I admit it reads rather stiff, especially the further I go. I mean come on, a fallen hidden female pirate captain in some steampunk world of floating ships? Yeah sign me the hell up. Some chapters are definitely better edited than others. At least two chapters as of CH 23 lacks spaces at all, making the wall of text hard to read. For the most part the grammar is pretty good,some normal mistakes that editing can fix. But there's a scattering of awkward phrases, misused terms. I'm not sure what to make of them since I'm no grammar expert either. The dialogue only gets increasingly stiff and scripted the further I go. Technical talk, commands/orders are perfect. On point. Person conversations between characters, or even insults sound unnatural to me. Maybe I just can't get into this style. I feel like I really would like the main storyline, there's a deep world in there. Pretty straightforward characters though, just reacting to the world around them. I would like something more of a hook, something to make me want to keep reading about the characters. So far I believe it's a plot strong story and wish the author all the best in building their world.
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An intriguing steampunk magical fantasy that caught my interest... steampunk is my fav genre and add fantasy... Yeah, totally a go! I like author's description very much and the display of emotions. i can imagine the scene and the writing is easy to understand. that's good enough for me. i don't like a complicated description that makes me grab a dictionary. simple and nice writing.