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The Moment I Started High School, I Formed a Contract With the Crimson Dragon Queen
3.46 (43 audimat)
Synopsis
The Blue Planet mutated, all living beings mutated back to their ancestral forms. In such times of evolution and crisis, the humans of the new age finally emerged with extraordinary powers — beast taming. Gu Ning who was 15 years old just entered high school had contracted an exceedingly ordinary small red snake. [Super Pet Cultivation System activated, please choose the pet beast to cultivate] Gu Ning glanced at the small red snake that was crawling about in the living room. [Cultivation target confirmed: Red Snake] [Cultivation Space: World of the Gods] [Cultivation time: 1000 years] [First-time cultivation activated 100 times amplification, correction: 100000 years] [Start cultivation……] [100000 years had passed in the World of the Gods, cultivation completed] Crack! Space itself was torn apart! A gorgeous, sister-like lady wearing a blazing red cheongsam walked out, she was so dazzling that she could probably charm the entire world! She smiled lightly and said to Gu Ning, “It’s been a long time, my little master!”
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quality of this translation is very low. sometime MC become he or she. it's very confusing to read. I lost few of my brain cell......4/10...
The story is about a reincarnated boy from earth in a futuristic world with beast taming. Mc finds a system that is like a hyperbolic time chamber but it is another world. The story seems to be good but the characters seem to be 1 dimensional but the most off putting thing is the grammar. The grammar is so bad that it seems the author doesn't know MC's main gender. Author if you have seen this please fix Mc's gender.
story seems interesting, but generic story, world mutates humans are useless besides being slave drivers, but ehh, probably one of the best amongst this pile of garbage with a few grains of gold
This reads like a heavily edited MTL. Same issues with genders and names that all the new stories have been having lately. Overall dont waste your time on this because it's......
Don't be fooled by the 4 &5 stars reviews. The story is trash, full of plotholes for the sake of plot, 0 proofread, its worse than the usual trial read. Don't waste your braincells on this.
There are too many grammatical mistakes you should edit them properly Initiation is already problematic making main characters she when it should be he for other things we will see how author reacts to comments and the remedies he makes
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I don't like this hypocrat mc............................................................................................................................................
The concept is good but the problem is the character development and story development are not upto the mark. The story is getting boring as i am reading ch 15.
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