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THE MAFIAS FORBIDDEN LOVE
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[Man] "You're being unreasonable, Alessia. I'm his father, and I have a right to be in my son's life."
[Alessia] "I know that, Marco, but I can't let you raise him in the same world you're in. The guns, the violence... I won't let our son become another one of your 'soldiers'."
[Marco] "My business is none of your concern. I'm a good father, and I provide for him. That's all that matters."
[Alessia] "Providing isn't just about money, Marco. It's about values, morals... a future. I want our son to have a chance at a normal life, not one spent looking over his shoulder, waiting for the other shoe to drop."
[Marco] "You're just trying to keep me from my son. I won't let that happen, Alessia. I'll do whatever it takes to be in his life."
[Alessia] "I'm trying to protect him from you, Marco. From the life you lead. Please, don't make me fight you on this."Here's a short blurb for your story:
"When alessia hid their son from mafia boss Marco, she thought she'd escaped the darkness. But now, he's found her. As they clash over their child's future, old flames reignite, and Sophia must choose between her desire for the man she once loved and her need to protect herself and their son from the dangerous world he represents.
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Too few chapters to write a review, but so far so good. Pace is a little slow and the story follows some common tropes, but it is easy to read. A synopsis, frequent updates, and cover could do wonders! Sending the author some good vibes! Keep writing!
After 7 years away, Alessia Guerrilla is returning to Italy to step into her role as the CEO of her company. The last time she was in this country she just so happened to leave her fiancé at the altar; a small piece of unfinished business that will undoubtedly come back to bite her. Especially given that her ex was none other than Don Marco Morlachi (and yes, that’s Don as in bullets flying and a family business that was not always conducted in the open) and she was returning with his 6yo miniature carbon copy in the shape of her much loved 6 year old son, Leo. It seems that her unfinished business will be keeping her busy for a while. With 5 chapters up, this story has some familiar tropes paving the way forward but it’s enticing to see how the MCs will reconcile their past and future. And I am interested in what triggered the FLs decision to break the heart of the man she seemed to care for and deny him knowing his own child for so long. The writing style is easy to read but would benefit from some descriptive language. I have no idea what the FL looks like; is she short or tall, plump or slim, dimples or serious? Her hair and eye colour are all a mystery. That’s just sad when you’re already broaching the 6th chapter and haven’t even gotten a hint of her style. There are also some grammatical errors, repeated paragraphs, and random typos that indicate a need for a basic proofreader. But the story has potential. Good luck to the author ✌🏻
Writing a review for the fp, seems interesting from the synopsis though, I'll probably give it a shot
interesting plot,,hope more to come that excite may imagination to read more
It’s same troops. If you like this kind of story it should work for you. I like the characters name here. Hehehe.
Disgusted by the cliché of the Chinese MC always winning/achieving everything. It's lazy writing and perpetuates stereotypes don't mind mejyst pasting chat gpt to get fp
I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~