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The legend of The crying shinobi (Naruto)
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Synopsis
???: Are you sure you want to do this.
???: Yes, After all this time I have finally found my Resolve.
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Inei: *sob* *sob* WHY, WHYYYYY........ Why did *Sob* You do this.
???: This is how the life is Inei. You are as weak as ever a dropout Crybaby.
Inei: B...Bu...But I...I...I.
???: You are nothing but a measly child you can't do anything even if you wished to, you can't even touch me. Get out of your delusions and Get stronger, STRONGER THAN ANYONE, BECOME THE STRONGEST SHINOBI IN THE HISTORY OF THIS WORLD AND TRY TO RETURN WHAT YOU OWE ME 10 TIMES AND I WILL FREE YOU FROM YOUR DELUSIONAL LIFE.
Inei: Why.... WHY.
???: Again with that same foolish question. Listen foolish little inei, I am a monster who kills for fun and I just massacred hundreds of people and children. This is a delightful game to me so and I give you a chance try and Kill me if you can.
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Inei: I PROMISE YOU I'LL BECOME THE STRONGEST, STRONGER THAN ANYONE, I PROMISE YOU I'LL BECOME THE STRONGEST SHINOBI IN THE HISTORY OF THIS WORLD, I WILL BECOME A GOD.
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Yamato: So you've choosen your ninja way, have you.
Inei: Till now My life was a forge, my nightmares were the flames and my Shinobi way is the sword which came out of it.
Unlike the story we know this one is a bit different, This story isn't about the a knucklehead shinobi, it is about a cry..... a cry of the past, A vision and The virtue. As the story unfolds see what was The mysterious shinobi's resolve and How did tears of a fragile boy forged him into an indestructible sword and From that to the strongest Shinobi in the History.
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it's a good fanfiction. recommended. there are a couple of errors but it is normal and they are not particularly serious. the idea is good, so keep it up author[img=update]
fantastic writing quality, great ideas for character design, great updating stability, and fantastic world background! ummm story development however.... well it jumps straight in from the chunin exams as being overpowered... like i GET that author-sama is doing back stories etc via flashbacks.... but... like it would be more enjoyable if we could ya know... actually read where tf our mc gets his powers from... or ya know have it develop over time? cuz tbh while its got great combat scenes, im not really 'invested' in our mc's safety due to not really knowing who tf he is as an individual due to the lack of having the world been developed before his big fight with orochimaru... >_> besides that ya got a lot going for ya.
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