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The Last Chance I Could Live!
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Synopsis
The first life, I died from an incurable illness. The god kindly gave me another chance to live as a healthy man, so I choose to be a chef since I couldn't eat much in my first life. However, I still died!
The god met with me a second time and said that it was his servant mistake for my dead. So, he gave me another life. But, due to some mistake from their operating system, I live my third life as a woman. Due to his kindness, he gave me power as a saint that strong enough to revive a dying human. But, I still died!
I hate that stupid god who was grinning in front of me after my third dead. He said this time it was because another god.
This time, I would request my life to be an immortal and I would live my life to the fullest! But still, this god won't do anything as careless as I had to do extra hard work to be an immortal or the ticket life he had was the last ticket, right?
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Hello, guys! 🤗 This story created for #WFP 20 and I am greatly enjoyed my time for writing this. This is my very first story for a contest, so I hope I can learn so much through this and in the same time entertain you guys with a fun and exciting story! Thank you for the views, reviews, comments, and the votes. I hope you can keep supporting me in #WFP 20~ 😁✌
An interesting read, Story has just begun, but the setup and writing seems promising. Eagerly waiting for release of more chapters. Might update review as the plot progresses.
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Amazing story! It leaves you with a question and it gives you the chance to choose if you want to believe in miracle or not! I recommend it to all readers that they want to read something new. Awesome work Salma! 😍👏
Haha... I really like Jeffrey and Ascalapus. Damn, that was so funny 😂 So, Jeffrey died 4 times and it was because of Ascalapus who claimed himself as The God of Life... I don't want Jeffrey to die but I miss Ascalapus tho 😂😂😂
Love the story👏🏻 can't wait for the next chapter🤩 at least put some poems there, a little poem wont broke your story. But i kinda felt that there is still room for character development.
This is my first time reading a novel and i can say that I'm not disappointed by this!! I've read many manga and comics but i never expected to read a storyline like this one!! It's fairly unique and "different" from your normal fantasy storytelling even though i never read novel before. I would definitely recommend this novel to my friends and family. Anyways, stay healthy and keep up the good work Author!!
Nice story! I enjoy it a lot ... I love Jeffrey and Ascalapus ... they surely funny🤣👌🏻 Good luck! I’m looking forward for the next chapter! Fighting 💪🏻
Nice👍 i will wait to the next chapter. But i think you should be write a poems. But overall i enjoyed every chapter. the author describes each chapter as best as possible
Nice story. This story is good for my free time when i get nothing to do. I'll give you 5star for updating daily. Since it kinda hard to do. Good luck.
Amazing storyyy!!! And funny at same time 😂😂😂 I will recommend this novel to all of my friends 😜😜 Can't wait for the next chapter of this novel 🤪🤪
Hey! You have an interesting story 😂 I really like to read it and will support you in #WFP 20. The characters are nice but if you could improve the description in the world background, it would be nice. Good luck!
good luck. love your story, waiting for the update. good luck. love your story, waiting for the update. good luck. love your story, waiting for the update. good luck. love your story, waiting for the update. good luck. love your story, waiting for the update. good luck. love your story, waiting for the update. good luck. love your story, waiting for the update
Really, I'm so interested to reads the story. And now, i wanna wait the chapters 10 and 11 to be released as soon as possible haha. Seriously, I can't wait ;(
Wow***!! Amazing story!! It's very good to read this novel before i sleep. I can't wait for the next chapters. Released as soon as possible pleaseeee!!
Very interesting premise of a useless God that kept killing the protagonist ahaha. Your story got great potential and you have room for improvement in your English and writing skills. There were a lot of grammatical errors but I know you're working on it. Keep writing and Have fun! Keep up the great work author! ^-^
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I couldn't wait for today's chapter! Please hurry up author. I want to know what kind of quest he gets 😂 Thank you for update this story, I think you deserve to win 🙃
The story was good and quite funny. Stay healthy author. There were some error in the grammar and vocabulary, but it was okay since I can understand. Work hard to improve it.
i like this kind of background story and about food ? i couldn't resist it hahaha. keep it update pls and dont stop at middle of story pls u,u