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The Journey of the Ibtala'a
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Synopsis
The story of a soul who wondered on the way to reincarnation and met a god. He was given the chance to become the beginning of a powerful race but first he, now she will have to earn it. Follow her journey of romance, love, heartbreak and fulfilling journey to reach the top and enjoy life while doing it.
#gender bend #yandere #action #adventure #romance #harem
*I own the right to no pictures used so far in this story. If you own the pictures then please contact me and Ill remove them.
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Please rate and comment if there is anything wrong so I can know what I should look back on. Story is in rather early development so I am also open to suggestions about where the story should go if you want to do that.
I like it so far, standard 18+ plot, with good grammar and decent pacing and descriptions. Though their are not a lot all of characters yet, the main character need be flesh out more and the story need a lot more world building but I believe it will do well or be interesting for awhile.
New writer here. I know the story isn't perfect so if you see anything wrong then write it here or in the paragraph comments and I will fix it if necessary. Writing a original, non-eastern story after not finding a gender bend from man to woman story with an actual good story that shows growth in character and has actual love, slice of life, and romance. Don't worry though, there will be action and adventure since the main characters favorite thing to do is to explore and see beautiful sights while seeing amazing mystical animals. Will eventually create a kingdom to govern and will rule it along with her harem. Harem will not be above six so there can be meaningful interaction between them.
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