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A soul has transmigrated into the Potterverse as Vivienne Ophelia Black: a ritual daughter between Orion Black and Druella Black nee Rosier. This story explores the dark side of the wizarding world when everything is at stake. Desperation fuels actions and the black madness prevails.
Notes: JK Rowling&Co owns Harry Potter.
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Well this is actually a good story if you ignore how casual it is being told. Imagine a western story in which all the silliness and immaturity was removed and replaced by a logical and mature thinking MC. Towards the end it gets silly again but overall if this story was told in a more drawn out manner this would be a 5 star story easily.
This this is f up but I'm loving it cause it's so psychotic and no offense but I wanted more but I have a question where's Narcissa why is she missing?
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I don't know how to start commenting on this. It's basically a psychotic transmigrator helped by plot armor to basically check off a list about everything you can do to end the cannon of the Harry Potter story/prophecy. You know, the one that goes, get rich, take ove the family, get rid of your enemies asap, get all the horcruxes, destroy them, take over the magical world... etc... etc. Honestly there is nothing interesting about this story. It's like reading a summary of what to do if you are ever transmigrated to HP world and are born into a pureblood family with OP cliche goldfingers, you know the ones: eidetic memory, OP magical prowess, super genius, immoral psychotic tendencies... etc... etc. I couldn't get past chapter 4, the story is too easy, there is nothing that feels like it can harm/impede her. Honestly, if she wasn't a psycho I would call her Mary Sue.