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Synopsis
What happens when you find out your wishes have more of an effect on the world than you realize?
Join Kizan Beifong, the Grandnephew of Toph Beifong and the son of two dangerous criminals. Watch how he keeps the world in balance with the avatar with his masterful earth bending.
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A/N: This is my third fan fic and I'm just doing this so I can get the inspiration that I had down in writing. If you guys want more of this then drop those powerstones or else I'll keep writing this for my own entertainment.
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Currently there are only 7 chapters, however what I have read so far everything is good. Writing Quality: 5 stars Story Development: 5 Stars- So far so good, I'm very interested in how the Author will do the Red Lotus Arc. Character Design: 5 Stars. Too early to tell. Updating Stability: 5 Stars. Too early to tell. World Background: 5 Stars. You should already know the LOK Worlds background.
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interesting start and some good potential, i hope to see new chapters soon cause this could become a really good fanfic so keep up the good work.