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Synopsis
It’s on pause until it’s worth continuing.
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Hayashi found himself reincarnated into the world of Naruto, where he discovered the Template System, which granted him the skills of the Greatest Swordsman from the One Piece universe.
As he honed his abilities, Hayashi surpassed even the legendary White Fang of Konoha in swordsmanship, earning recognition in the ninja world.
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Story is AU and modified.
I will be posting this story on RoyalRoad.com
I don't own Naruto or One Piece. Kudos to Masashi Kishimoto and Eiichirō Oda.
If you want to read the original version without alterations:
火影世界的大剑豪
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This is my first time writing. I appreciate all your feedbacks. If you find errors, do not be kind - just be truthful.
I can guarantee a minimum of 3 chapters per week.
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Honestly I was enjoying this fanfic, as a template system focused on swordsmanship it was interesting, but for the main character to suddenly out of left field get the ability to brainwash a jonin even if you claimed it was a genjutsu, which I don’t think it was ever stated that he possessed, Nah man I’m out next thing you know he’s gonna be a hive mind overlord and this is just gonna be another smut novel.
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Its a good fanfic. It had a weird arc that I would recommend to simply skip but all in all a good piece of writing.
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MC is just a p*dophile who has the chance to be reborn, attracted to Hinata because she is submissive, and grooms him from an early age, what is attractive about an 11-year-old? I don't know, suddenly The MC wants to have his organization start with Zazuba and at that moment the story loses all interest. Without this romance and attraction to children, this insane desire. GOD, this story would have been a masterpiece. So sad
Es una buena historia, es mas realista que muchas de las historias que leí de Naruto, especialmente cuando empieza la invasión. No hay mucho que pueda criticar de la historia. El MC tiene buen carácter y desarrollo de personaje al igual que Hinata. Otra cosa que me gusta es la reacción que tienen los demás al derramamiento de sangre, en otras historias si el MC le cortara un brazo a su oponente o lo matara, empezarían a llover criticas de todos lados, viven en un mundo de Guerra y debería ser algo normal como se mostró en esta historia. Le puse 4 estrellas a desarrollo de la historia no porque haya algo que no me gustó sino porque sentí que le faltaba algo a la historia, aunque no sabría decir que, en este momento vi hasta el capitulo 62 así que no se si eso salió después.
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mc cheats on Hinata developes a harem and gets BJ's from loli hanabi whens shes like 11 or younger.