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The First Magic World War
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Synopsis
Charlotte Meklen had crossed into the Fars Empire, seeking only to become a civil servant in a different continent. She wasn't a combatant...
But who would have thought that even clerical staff would end up on the battlefield!
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So far, I've read up to chapter 42 of this novel and have decided to stop reading it. Aside from the inconsistent translation quality on Webnovel, which causes the novel's pronouns (he/she) to shift frequently, making it confusing to determine the MC's gender. Personally, I don't like the author's approach to developing the story. I feel that too many things are skipped over in the narrative, and the involvement of other characters is minimal, which makes the world-building feel rather empty and unappealing. (As of chapter 42 that I've read).
The story has issues with solidifying the gender of the main character, as it jumps between male and female, it makes it quite difficult to read.
It feels bland, and constant jumping back and forth between female and male leaving me baffled about genders. It’s ok if you have nothing else. Definitely wouldn’t spend coins on it tho
It would be a pretty okay story if someone could just pick a gender for the main character or established concrete gender fluidity in an accessible way. The inconsistent switching with no reason it makes it difficult to read.