He blocks a sword that is aiming to take his life and counters it by slicing his enemy, ending his life. The blood he smelled from his enemie's wound reeked of iron. As soon as his enemy had fallen another one came and took his place. He was starting to feel tired and did not believe he could continue anymore, but he still pressed on for he knew that if he died here today he wouldn't be able to see his family and the empire he serves would crumble to dust. With these thoughts he pushed on and continued to slay his enemies. When his last enemy laid dead at his feet he let out a shout of victory for now that there are no more enemies he can finally rest. he fell to his knees and remembered how it all started.
"WAKE UP MAGGOT!"
Peter woke up with a jolt, his blood run cold as the adrenaline from being waken up by a shout runs through him. he looks up to see his captain standing over him, with his thick muscles that look as if could be from a bears. with quick haste, he stands up and gives a salute to his captain. he felt fear from the fact that he was caught sleeping by his captain. he could only imagine the punishment he would receive. many people have fallen over unconscious from the harsh punishments. The captain shouts " 50 LAPS AROUND THE FIELD AND WHEN YOUR DONE YOU WILL GO TO BED WITHOUT DINNER!"
Peter's face paled as he heard his punishment and saluted his captain one last time before starting running around the field. he kept thinking in his head on what other cruel punishments his captain would have in store if he was caught sleeping again.
After Peter had ran the 50 laps, he collapsed on the floor and had a feeling of needles in his throat that where threatening to throw him into the abyss by closing his throat forever. After Peter had a well deserved rest for running 50 laps around the field non-stop, he got up and went to his secret stash of bread and cheese and ate. Once he had had his fill he left to his bed and allowed a movie of his thoughts to show has he went into a quiet slumber.
This is my first time writing a story that is used for a class so please leave any advice you may have and tell me if you see and grammatical errors.