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The Elden Lord /ASOIAF
4.09 (32 audimat)
Synopsis
A human gets reincarnated as by a ROB into a song of ice and fire. He is given the powers of Sage of the Xmen and the location of one of the lost Valyrian steel swords in Westeros. He chooses to leave the North to make something of himself in this life.
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When I heard what power X had, I was excited, it was disappointing, for a modern man it is really idiotic , he has a submissive mentality, his biggest dream is to be under the yoke of a lord despite that reputation, that wealth , he's an idiot, he's embarrassing when he tries to approach someone bigger than him politically , the story is difficult to read, It's written like a bad script .The conversations are shrill .
not a bad i find it enjoyable, if given more dialogue it's well be great and i will giv it 5 stars.
Magnificent completely without fault and just great overall plot lines. where have you been all our lives author_san
Eu estou achando incrível, Só tenho uma pequena crítica que espero que sirva para algo.. A história é muito apressada, não sei se isso é sua intenção mas você poderia ter colocado muita história, desde ele como patrulheiro, depois como aprendiz de ferreiro, depois na libertação de escravos etc etc.. Mas está muito bom, espero que não seja abandonado..
I have no idea why there aren’t more bad reviews. 1. The main character is wildly inconsistent with his power usage and only remembers to use them when they are needed for the plot and continently forget them as soon as a plot point needs to be introduced. 2. The pacing is all over the place and new characters are mentioned and forgotten the next paragraph making the attempt building of seemingly meaningful character connections and the general flow of character interactions/Dialogue is cancer to read. 3. The story is for the most part narrated to you and is more of a ’tell’ rather than ‘show’ method of storytelling making it a story that is hard to feel exited about or feel any connection to the main character. Overall the concept seems like it would be a very interesting story/setting but the execution form what I have read is poor. I do hop the author takes this in to account for any further FF’s as these are not mistakes in writing you should ignore if you hope to get better. No hate author just pointing some things out I hope you have a good day futher and keep improving your writing.
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The quality is decent, minimal spelling mistakes. I like the main character, I would say he is a pretty likeable character. His personality isn’t edgy, that’s a plus. The most jarring part of this novel is the writing style. If you’re here for a detailed, well written battle fic, it’s not for you. It reads more like a summary then an actual novel.
this one of the best got/asoiaf fanfic out there hope you keep updating the book looking forward to the next chapter
overall I just don't like it, with everybody idiotic thing the mc does i lost my interest
The story is very good, my only complaint is that the chapters are too short and rushed. I hope that in the future the chapters will be longer and have two points of view per chapter so that we have a better sense of the setting in that world. But the story is excellent, I give it 10/10. Note: Keep writing, it's really good! [img=proud]
Good good good interesting and well wrote got fics here,see for yourself good good good good good good good good good good good good good goodgood good good good good good good good good good
Honestly I liked the story, but it's clear that what we're reading is like a diary where the protagonist narrates his life, there's no dialogue, no thoughts or even written interaction, the protagonist simply states that something happened as if he was remembering an old story of his life, honestly I never got a Game of Thrones story that was truly good, but this one had the potential if it was written as a story, and not as a diary of his own. events.