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The dance of fate
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Synopsis
ROB ran out of ideas (which he didn't have), so he decided to pull the truck trick again. This story is about rebirth in ancient Mesopotamia in the world of Fate. Actually if you think these story will be likethat, you got fakediscriptioned.
P. s. I don't own the fate series and the picture
p.s2.0 english is NOT my main language ( I really suck at these, buut i don't want to write story and then translate it with google.. Why? Bc why not?)
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It's pretty good, several words are misspelt but it's easy to get over them. This is a meme fic, so if you cant handle that, dont bother reading, but if you enjoy these kind of fics, I suggest giving it a read.
it's good but the author nerf the mc. i mean why make the him/her op if you will just nerf him/her so yeah its good but its not my type of story ✌️✌️✌️😀😀 (english is not my first language)
You should feel bad author, this, I saw this and became eager to read such interesting idea, only to find dissapointment in reality, this has no grammar, absolutely no sense of fluidity, the plot doesn't makes sense and the writing format is a mess! Why?! Why ruin such a good idea in this way?
The most moronic, goblicky, stupid, lowlife author. 🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕
the idea was good but the story was confusing. put too many extra things in the story that made no sense while not explaining anything
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This story is overall a good story. The idea is great and has a lot of pontential, it is pretty well written and I would recomend it if you like the fate franchise, please do continue updating author