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The Chronicles Of Raiaterra
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700 years ago, Ophiuchus - The 13th Zodiac Clan declared war on the 12 Zodiac Clans which caused a massive decimation throughout the land of Raiaterra. Soon after that, the 4 strongest Zodiac Clans decided to use the power of the Elemental Rings to seal King Yama to put an end to his ongoing havoc and once again, the land of Raiaterra were put into peace. However, the 12 Zodiac Clans dreaded that King Yama will return once again to destroy the world.
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The flow of the story is good, and it's easy to follow. There are some grammar errors and word misuse, but overall, it's still a good read. I quite like the theme so I am a bit partial to it, though. You can tell the author put in a lot of effort in their story, so do give this a try! Hopefully, you'll enjoy it too.
Hi! I'm going to rate my own work personally. To be honest with you, my writing quality would be stabling in the middle since I'm not an experienced writer. I have plenty of grammar and misused words and vague comprehension. As for the updates, I genuinely think it serves as a perfect star because I release 1 chapter a day and there's also a chance of 2-3 chapters if I have time. For Story development, it's pretty difficult for me to rate it but I'll go with 4 stars since I've tackled a lot of backstories that have a connection to the current pacing. Not to mention the distribution of each arc. Although I'm pretty sure that most people will find the pacing normal or slow. Character design will be in the middle since there's generally no indication of it, it's just focused entirely on how the characters develop. Lastly, world background. I guess it deserves a perfect star? The category is pretty much how the world started and there's a couple of hints on how it looks like from the character's point of view.
You really impressed me, even if there are some misspelled words, I'm sure you'll work on that.and your characters were interesting.your storyline was great all through.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Wow, this story is great! Long chapters and great pacing. I love MC Niles and his family. Very little to no writing errors that I could find and the characters are relatable. A fun read that is refreshing! Well done author!!