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The Captains Prize
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Synopsis
Katelyn has always been a proud and pampered princess. She grew up sheltered and doted on by her parents, never knowing the dangers that existed her small family life. In a twist of fate, she finds herself faced with an intimidating yet attractive man and path wrought with hardships she never could have prepared herself for. Will she fight for her freedom or will she fall under his rule and learn sometimes love can find you even in the darkest and most unsuspecting places?
You can expect from this novel: mature content, possible violence, explicit language.
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It does feel like a sea adventure we are going places and very little reasons to feel salty. Some errors from a technical standpoint but nothing that kills the flow of story. The captain is a mysterious character that I'd like to know more about as the book progresses. The female lead is a scared girl among rough necked sailors. The background details could be a bit stronger. Like the smell of mold permeating the whole of the wooden underdeck or maybe pipe smoke came rolling out of the crew quarters when sailor A came above decks to empty out his stomach that reacted wrong to the weevil encrusted pilot bread. It has potential. Enough ******* between characters to stay interesting.
I haven't read a pirate story in a really long time, so it caught my interested. The chapters I read were really good just a few proofreading error. I mention in a comment about not repeating paragraphs, I think repeating them will cause confusing. So I would take the repeat out. Overall it's a well written pirate story and even though I feel for our female protagonist I'm a bit curious how you proceeded on with her journey. Good start. I look forward to your updates.
Writing Quality: By no means this novel has perfect grammar. Despite not having any immersion breaking errors, it has glaring problems even in the first few chapters. But from the author's choice of words and richness of the vocabulary used in the novel, I can deduce that the author is really putting in the effort. I'm giving 5 stars in this department because I genuinely think with the effort the author is putting in, things will start to improve soon. Stability of updates: I don't think there are enough chapters to judge the stability of updates, but since the chapters came in bursts, I'll give it 4 stars instead of 5 for now. Story Development: So far so good. As long as no one gets *ehem* forced into uhm you know.. Anyway, there is nothing to complain about the story development and I hope it stays that way. (pls no râpe) Character Design: I like how the mc still acts like a sheltered girl instead of magically maturing at the first sign of danger. I think, you can safely expect that there will be no abrupt, out of character moments in this novel, which is, unfortunately, not that common for this website. World Background: This might be the biggest allure of this novel. It's rare to see any pirate themed novel on wn let alone one that is written decently. There is so much potential since it's largely uncharted waters ( pun intended) and from what I can see, it's on its way to live up to that potential.