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“Only those with great intentions can see this book and those chosen by the book will make its desired story…
but you will never return.”
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Credits to Patricia Coleen Balmocena for doing the book cover.
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What a great story. A lot of lessons learned. Somewhat it reminded of a great saying, a great life is not lived for their own self but rather lived for the sake of others. Hurrraayyyyy. MysticAmy Job well done writer. More great stories to write. God bless
I will review my story as a writer. :) Nothing wrong about giving myself a self-assessment. ^^ For the translation quality, I give myself a 5. Originally, this story was in our language, Tagalog, but I translated it in English and the story was better delivered compared to it in Tagalog. :) Furthermore, for the updates, I update daily so I also give myself a 5. :D For the story development, I give myself a 4 because I did the story quite fast. It is a fast-paced story and I hope to make my next stories longer. This story turned out to be a short story instead. As for the charater design, I give myself a 4 because I wrote in a POV of a male character which I had a bit of challenge because I am a female writer. XD And I also think that Cevin is not a very remarkable character. Lastly, for the world background, I give myself a 5. :) I am very confident about the world I created. I made my own language, and the world is unique in its own way; existing inside a book and is dependent on a person who had to sing foreveeeeer. Anyway, this is the rate I give myself. ^^ I thank so much the readers who read my book even though it's not popular and the story is just short lived. :) You guys are the best!
Very interesting! Hindi ako masyado palabasa ng libro pero naagaw neto atensyon ko. Looking forward para dito sana hindi magsawa ang author sa pagawa ng chapters! I hope hindi gumawa pa ng ibang book
I have read the other book of my wifey so i have no problem to give this book too 5 star~🥰🥰🥰 She is a great author so i'm sure that this book is great as well!👍👍👍
I read the published version of this at home since you showed me years ago. It is a good story, however, it was short for me and I know you would do better in this story if you made it longer. Considering that this is fantasy, it is amazing you made it so short but it would be more awesome if you made a lot of chapters for this. But I understand since the contest where you joined this in was short stories only. I hope you would make this into a novel soon? What do you think?
The prologue is quiet intriguing. "Only those who are with pure heart... bla la... can see the book.... desired story." This one might be the same with the anime, Death note,because it's about a book but it isn't. This is too different. It got me back into reading fantasy books. Better read this story guys. It's worth it.
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This is actually a pretty good start! The author just posted 5 chapters and one prologue but it already got me hooked! I clicked on the link immediately when it was shared in FB and it did not disappoint. I like how it was written. The author said that she found it difficult to write in a POV of a man but she did well. The story is not too fast and not too slow... just right! and the characters are okay, too. The mysterious world is not yet described well since it has only been 5 chapters but this is indeed promising. Keep it up! :D