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The Anemone Effect
4.69 (13 audimat)
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[If you're interested in this book, check out my other book My Lovely Hair and don't get the wrong Idea, it isn't romance]
"A young black boy "
"Names Autry Gregson"
"..."
"is thrown into a hellish wo-"
"My man said hellish, cuz are you on crack?"
"BRO SHUT UP I CREATED YOU!"
"say less"
"big man ting fam Autry you tryna take the mick?"
"Patten up fam I ain't do sh*t u just saying the wrong words"
"... bro ur not hard calm down"
"..."
"watch Lemmy do it right cuz like I Autry is obviously better at this"
"say less"
"So basically yeah, the whole world was f*ckign terraformed or some shit by some alien guy and we got 3 random abilities through some lottery sh*t yeah and yeah"
"... the f*ck was that?"
"dunno"
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PS: Use of very strong Language*
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Honest Opinion so far. The story has little chapters but I'll still leave a review as I believe the story is good but needs to go through editing for some chapters, as noted in previous reviews of others. The story itself is good but grammatical errors, punctuation, and so on could use some fixing but that's a common issue! Easily fixed but I believe the story is still worth reading otherwise. The plot is well crafted, the world building is captivating, and the character building is done well. I would recommend reading, just keep doing your best Author! You got my support!
Overall the story is interesting, mostly the characters for me. A nice character design, along with a good story. Though the world background has room for improvement. The grammar is also good enough too.✌
Apart from a few grammatical errors, I have to say that the story so far is hilarious and intriguing in my opinion. The characters remind me of an anime where the mc shouted a lot but is still extremely loveable. Although it's still in it's begining stages, I think this story has the potential to make it big (人 •͈ᴗ•͈)
this is one crazy novel well feels like there are 2 MC and world has started building itself with words oaf author and such enormous potential is rare i hope to see more of this madness each character is given well deserved attention and it's not too much as well and grammar and grip on language feels like author is crazily firm in them
The story so far did a very great job at fishing curiosity. Seems promising. However, it lacks proper use of punctuation, and in effect, some sentences become confusing and hard to be understood.
The storyline is uniquely similar to a few I have seen but not quite seemes as tho the MC is an orphan who's worlds shifts and reborn in the game simulation if I am not wrong.. I don't play games.. U have explained things clearly but at some moments it gets a little confusing. The vocab used is amazing There are very little to almost non grammatical mistakes only found a 'Th' and if I am correct 2-3 words writen wrongly? Hum yesh. The way u express each action taking place gives the reader ig more info on what's taking place. the characters seem to be really self centered a bit and open shamelessly ahem.. And seem to have some issues anger.. To excited with makes me wanna smack them to shut them up but can't but they are over all most seem to have a good chemistry good character base to be exact. Over all its a great story bub demm... Your imagination is out of the league... But over all its truly fascinating. Byebye author-shi it was fun reading :)
Amazing premise for the book, with a increase in grammatically quality it could be a top book! 10/10. I love this book so much that I am going to read it every night now.
I've only ready a few chapters of the book and I must say the book is interesting and I've loved it you've got extraordinary writing skill are amazing keep it up and bring more chapters
Helo, the development is interesting so far and I had a good laugh from some jokes. Just note some grammar errors and it'll be good to go. Unique way of writing too. Keep up the good work.
The writing quality is superb, and the story development was really on point. The characters are very interesting. Although the world and premise were quite full of cliches, it's still a good work. Very recommended to new readers out there.
I have read the first few chapters and I can say is that the story is very interesting to read. Though I am not sure of the writing quality as it could use a little better. I highly suggest to use grammarly to improve your writing quality. All in all it has a firm plot and good characters.
Just an extremely biased review from the Author here take no notice but here is a book I'm creating and I hope that you guys like it though 1 chap there will be more in the future Adios my amigos and i hope you have quite the adventure as you follow our Main character Autry Gregson and his friend Shawn Malory
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