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A girl dies and weeps at her gravestone hoping for an escape to the reality she was forced to accept. Who would've known that her cries would be heard......
Join her as she becomes something the Wizarding world can't handle. And maybe other worlds too.....
I ain't good with sypnosises so sorry lol
BTW although I say gradually op my definition of gradual can vary. I'm hoping I do this right but if not then I am extremely sorry.
Another thing.
DO NOT POST COMMENTS THAT ARE DISRESPECTFUL. THEY WILL BE DELETED I PROMISE YOU THAT. CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM IS FINE BUT SAYING IT'S TRASH AND THAT YOUR DROPPING IT ON THE FIRST DAMN CHAPTER IS PROHIBITED. I AINT TAKING THE DISRESPECT. ALTHOUGH SOME OF YOU MAY HATE IT FWR BUT OTHERS MAY LIKE IT. DON'T RUIN THE DAMN VIBE BECAUSE YOU'RE HAVING A BAD DAY.
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Author. This is the only Harry Potter fanfic I've read with stars in my eyes. I liked it very much. Please release more chapters ... and more
I genuinely don't think I am very good. I made this for my and other's entertainment. But I also want to write better too. I hope that all reading this can help me improve my writing and tell me what I need to do to help this story and all my other stories improve
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The character had massive potential to be good, however, I felt that the story was too rushed. She becomes a 'master' too easily and with no real attempt to show what that entails, then she avoids occlumency for a reason which made little sense in terms of how magic works in harry potter. The first few chapters have her accomplish things which take others lifetimes, and yet she does multiple each year only to then achieve nothing on that scale again for the next 6 years. Her mother accepts the situation too easily, and her character is mentioned then just dumped as if she was useless. Not very well thought out, but for those who love an instant OP female lead, I'm sure you'll have a blast, especially as the grammar and spelling is done well. A real shame.
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I did not pay attention to constructive criticism(I do not understand this), I was carried away by reading. Well, the novel is good, but at a fast pace(although not bad), I would like you to continue writing, I wish you good luck))) P. S>>> If there are errors, I apologize, I used Google translator.
Really good so far Wishes compliment eachother and make her farely OP I have a couple of questions though? Is this going to be a harem? (If so i hope it’s yuri only) Is there gonna be any Major plot differences? Such as lily and james living? Will there be any Bashing (like Granger or weasley bashing?) Finally will dumbeldore be manipulative or not?