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Tenth author's journal 2A: Mikhail
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Synopsis
The war between demons and angels that has raged across countless worlds is now spreading to Obsidian. Thousands of independent city-states have ruled the Obsidian world for centuries, rising high above a dark, wind-tossed ocean. The Obsidian world is now threatened by an all-out war between angels and demons. Book 2 focuses on the third archangel, Mikhail, and how their decisions affect the world surrounding the war. Sides A and B offer different perspectives on a single-choice play-out that changes the story forever.
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Story is good as far I read. But there are few things. Like there are some grammar mistakes and some confusing sentences. Although I know story is a journal so it would be from Mikhail's Pov. But reading it sometimes is boring. Story is good. You don't know where story will go.
interesting concept. if only you updated more frequently and fixed some minor grammar mistakes. This book has good potential. Can't give a final say until there are enough chapters. throwing it into my library till it reaches 100 chapters so I can binge read.
I love the idea about angels and demons. It is very distinctive story idea with good plot. Be frank, I never read this kind of story. I am certain it is very potential to gain many readers. Keep up your good works.
Okay, first of all your story idea is unique and you deserve accolades for that. The pace work is good and the conversations are not too complicated. The problem is the large paragraphs and sometimes iffy grammar useage. The misuse of certain pronouns ruin the flow and also you write in a play format.
The world seems well thought and the characters are well described. Where I had a little more trouble was the mistakes in the sentences. You might want to use a free editing software or app to help out with that. But the story has much potential :)
With my small intellect, I assume it was a decent novel, but I had trouble understanding it. However, it contained a lot of details, and I believe that one day it will improve and perhaps even become more well-known as a novel. It was a little difficult to identify who was who, but that might just have been a problem with me. Everything else was great.
I'm loving the novel. It's very well-written and the characters are very good. I can't wait to read more.
very unique storyline.......something which goes out of the usual style/genre being one of its kind.....worth reading and totally recommendable....[img=recommend]
i kinda pity the mc. living a life in a cell when your family is outside. never read a story that went like this, hopefully it gets even better from how good it is now :)
This story isn't that unique, at least so far, but it gives a decent taste. Writing quality needs some work but it's doable. As for stability of updates, well, it's stable, at least. Characters are well written and world background is a bit confusing at first but you'll get the whole picture quite easily in the next chapters. Overall, this is a decent read.
The storyline was a bit complex for me to understand since it's my first time reading this kind of genre. Other than that, it was interesting plot so keep it up👍🏻
Only one thing comes to mind: wonderful. The first-person point of view is not my favorite, but this novel completely changed my opinion. I had the impression that I was there in the situation with the characters thanks to the author's excellent descriptions, and I haven't yet found any errors in the grammar. The narration in the chapters I've read is also simple to understand. You'll be fascinated after reading the first few chapters because the idea of angels and demons in general is so alluring. I advise everyone looking for something new and soothing to read this book. but I'll advise the Author to post more chapters
This book is well-written and one cannot help but fall in love with how smoothly the story flows. The dilemmas faced by the protagonist remind us of our own. Characters are developing at their own pace. You are doing a great job writing this.👍
This book is great. The world-building is explained well. easy to understand and it has great potential. The writing plot is too exciting so is the writing style. Everything is well written. Nice work. Good story keep it up
You have to know this you're an incredible writer. keep writing I love the plot while the characters are amazing. Writing style everything ❤️
truthfully this story is interesting, but there are a lot of mistakes and errors in grammar as well as phrasing. but it is an all around interesting storyline. keep up the work and keep improving
Very creative, interesting to read, Beautifully written The whole idea of the concept is Really Astonishing, Characters are well described, Situations are sometimes very intense that makes the story more enjoyable, This book is highly recommended!
I found the story very unique and interesting from the start itself, great work author, the plot about mortals and immortals is very well written, I can't wait to find out the outcome of everything, surely recommend this to everyone 💖💖💖
The story is so unique from the usual genre i read and this has me hooked. I love the story and would love to see how it goes. I highly recommend it!