Teen Lion: a Teen Wolf Fan-Fic

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please_be_gentle_

mc behaving like a despo for a girl(allison) who doesn't give a sheet about him and is already in a happy relationship with Scott and they are flirting and kissing all the time in front of him but our mc still trying his best to somehow have her just shows how much degrading and loathsome his character is and on top of it he boasts to be a lion having immense pride yeah that's some disgusting sheet.

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Tasha_Williams_0673

I will be joining you on this journey author, I hope you update consistently and don't drop............................................................................................................

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Genesis_999

It's trashy mc morality world view is trash he isn't anything special and author keeps trying to Cu*ck the first was Allison now kira disgusting lowlife mf

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IDislikeYuri

Will there be any yuri? Thought I would ask before reading and expecting harem, only to find out it is polyamory. lalalalalalalalalalalalalala

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Kimhi

Good story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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H3LI0S

A very good FF, no nefting MC, the plot dont feel forced, MC was based on Jason Momoa so he is very lovable . The harem part was done better than most harem novel , it feel fresh and NPC do have reaction toward it. The only thing I want the author to improve is the fight scenes, I really hope to read some brutal and vivid fight scenes. There two major complaints which are yuri and power scale. The Yuri is very light, it only happen between harem members and not without the MC knowing it. I dont know why people nowadays hate yuri that much, even famous TV shows had it and people love it. Some dudes even get trigger when two girls make out in a threesome, like seriously? How weak mind are you? For the power scale, some dudes got mad because MC cant win a 1 vs 2 fight against Jackson and Peter FRICKIN Hale. Dude, MC name is not Rey Skywalker, he just a beginner (3 to 4 year with no one to teaches him) at that time with no major power buff. Stop reading system and wuxia novel for sometimes my man.

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SmilingReader99

Pretty decent Fanfic so far, only have a few issues if you could really call it that. One is that the grammar needs some work. Not sure if English is a second language to the author or not but it needs some work. Another is the dialog, if feels very weird and Disorienting, reading American teenagers talk like characters out of a Chinese wuxia novel. Besides that, not to bad.

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Devontae_Stephens

well it is absolutely logical that he has his own harem because he is an basically an a lion so it is basically logical because in a lions Pride they have females and those females will basically be the Lions own harem

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Gd_Sys

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Melshan

Add to the Harém: Allison Argent, Lydia Martin, Malia Tate, Kira Yukimura, Cora Hale, Kate Argent, Kali(maybe), Hayden Romero(maybe). HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM

I have though all day if in this novel were something to criticize, but i haven’t find anything yet, and i think that i will never find it... this story is such pregnant of emition. The story, even though it is a fan-fic from teen wolf, is original and surprisingly well written. Just read this novel!

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DaoistWTkzUH

I've read this story every time the author had added a new chapter... this fan fiction is fantastic, very calibrated in its more "movimentated" parts and the more romantic ones. i really recommend to everyone this novel![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Mr_Ink2065

Leaving a 5 star review here. Keep it up Author👍

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Isaiah_1217

Quite an interesting and intriguing book especially with the MC being a werelion instead of like werewolf, vampire or something of that sort do wonder how things will play out also like how u started it beforeteen wolf begins so MC won't be the cliche new kid that is suspected of being the alpha and more so he is the captain instead of Jackson and is together with Lydia also enjoyed the little plot twist of Laura being alive and MC being adopted by a old couple wonder what will happen next overall have enjoyed reading this book look forward to getting the chance to continue reading whenever ur able to get chance to continue

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Justindemigod

This story has been fantastic so far and I can't wait for more.

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DRACONIAN619

The story has a lot of potential. I can't wait to see where you will take the story. I'm only three chapters in and I'm already hooked.

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Adearick

Good start, continue like this. [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]

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KokuangyoNoJutsu

It's good...............................