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Tales of the Paladin

奇幻 53 Chapitres 476.1K Affichage
Auteur: AdmiralBayabas

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In a world where dragons, elves, dwarves, sea-folks, monsters, demons, and polygamy - lives a young boy dreaming a journey of a lifetime with his giant hammer in hand with his wives at his back to support him. Conquer dungeons, raid bosses, seize treasures, and of course have a harem! Journey into the world of magic, blood, gore, and wonder! This is the start of a young man in his journey to become the very best. The tales of the Paladin begins here!

*Book cover is not mine.

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AdmiralBayabas

As the Author of this novel, I think I did great on writing this novel. But please start review my work. I think your comments will help me make my novel even better. ♥️

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AraAra
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MORE CHAPTER PLEASE

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BlackieD

Initial idea was good but failures occur after failures in history. When I started to read I thought it would be better than the original, but I was terribly engaging. 1 - His first wish was 777x, did not explain what would be multiplied. Were they just benefices or would they be harmful? For example a creature with a lot of lifespan draw more to reach adul.thood * elves *. In the case of physical abilities if a normal person takes 1 hour to travel 1 kilometer, with his capacity he should travel 777 kilometers (but this is not the case in history) 2 - The supreme system of the universe, he spends a culktivo for girl but he only sticks his hammer like a retard. It even gave her the supreme technique of the universe. the system is human and it scares me, and worse it flirts with the system. 3 - the weapon part is at least viable. History Critics: 1 - took forever to go out to explore the world. 2 - his pursuers took 16 years to find him coinciding with the time he leaves to explore the world. (very cliche) 3 - who would worry about parents who would choose to venture instead of caring for their reborn child (see MC died 38 years) 4 - does not specify the difference of lvl and respective status. In this case we do not know how well the x777 works 5 - did not speak of class advantage and disadvantage (low - medium - high) 6 - from where this line of paladin came out if mother was maga (ice - fire) and father swordsman. (see that it was well explained that his mother inherited his ability by bloodline). 7 - fenryr as a pet is very cliche in these stories

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Dagda
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nice novel, written really well. Based on the world of WOW, but understandable even to those who have never played with it. Congratulations to the author. only small flaw, does not have a stable update. but I'm sure the author will fix this too.

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CaptainBoyHole

Doesn't have a stupid fucking sword in a isekai novel. 5 stars just for that. ..... ...............................................................

6yr
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Mr_Rich_Huaxia

I love this novel but this novel update stability is too slow, if you don't want your reader abandon your novel please at least update 1 chapter per day otherwise we will die because of waiting

6yr
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lunarazz

I've made the effort of trying to get through the - Sadly - horrible writing that this story contains. The plot is fine, not great but alright. The way of writing though... every sentence is delivered like a list of groceries. There is no flow in the story; painfully bad I'm afraid. 3/5 for plot. 1/5 for writing.

6yr
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Yggdrasil_

Really like this novel so far, will you keep udating? Do you have any kind of social media or discord I can follow to know the updating time? Thanks x.

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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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aaelite2

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.

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