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Synopsis
Humans, a species considered to be weak, selfish, cruel, egoistic and ignorant. A species who didn't carry any special trait or power.
But, what's to happen when a girl, weak and easily manipulated, changes the fate of the three worlds? What's going to happen when a mere human is set to destroy Heaven, Earth, and Hell as we know it?
Will she be able to be stopped? Or will the three worlds be destroyed?
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" 'Cough' Help 'Cough' Please help" A voice as gentle as flowing water, a voice as soft and smooth as honey kept on pleading. Pleading to humans of Earth, pleading to deities of Heavens, just to save her life.
Just because she didn't want to die. She wanted to live.
A little girl, who was entrapped in the burning house, who has been more innocent than the word innocence itself. A girl, who is even more pure than the flames of Holy Fire.
The girl who is more sacred than the water of Holy river Ganga. She was pleading to each and every creature of this Universe, just because she didn't want to die.
*Boom!*
But as if even the gods don't have any mercy towards this little girl, the entire house exploded out with flames engulfing each and everything including her.
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'My lady, we can save her.' The bird side of the phoenix stated.
' I know.' The heavily fatigued phoenix replied, who was finding it more and more difficult to stay put her eyes open. After all, for the goddess of rebirth and reincarnation, it is damn easy to revive this person.
' Then, what is concerning you, my lady?' Bird asked, curiously.
'Her.' She replied honestly. Despite the tiredness taking toll on her, she was still completely clear-headed.
' Why?' Bird asked.
'She is a weakling. I don't want to waste my breath saving an unworthy individual.' She replied, as if she was in a great dilemma.
'My Lady, is she reminding you.. of your past self.' Bird asked, with little hesitation. After all, there was a time, when this Phoenix used to be stupid, innocent, carefree yet a complete weakling, too.
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Spoiler de révélationI don't mean to be rude but I honestly think that the writing quality still has a huge room for improvement, especially (but not limited to) grammar, punctuation and the general coherence. But it's certainly entertaining!
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Good novel, understandable and very good world background, i like the way of writing. Its very unique, they way you want to express your world background is clear too........................................................
Author your book is amazing. I don't whether to anticipate for Aelin's character growth in this book. Or to look forward to how Elentiya would avenge for Aelin with the help of Park Taekook. Not to mention i am looking for this taboo love story between Taekook and Kavya, too. Because, i can bet they will fall for each other. Harder than anyone can thought. Kudos to the author, you did a great work.
I love the writing progression. The exposure of multiple world and their idea is nicely done. The character mapping is really good. The world design is really interesting. I am really excited to read this 😸
Author, first of all the word that you used are very precise, you completely describe the world background so well, the characters, they are funny and very lovely! You know how to describe every move they create, where mind goes imaginative and precise about the scene.🤧❤️
🤩🤩 Bringing my bed to camp over 🛌 The story is really interesting the characters are fleshed and you can see how much work the author put into building her world. **Rubs hands together* Can't wait.
Unique as it seemed, it is so actually. The author has punched down her thoughts in words with the sheerness of a professional writer, and that's the uniqueness here. May the writer becomes successful.
The writing here is beautiful, definately above most novels here on webnovel. Author's vocabulary is extensive and paints a vivid picture for the reader to lose themselves in. For any lover of fantasy, dont miss out!! give this one a shot for your own sake. <3
This novel has a good story background with little bit of Indian touch which I like the most. Improvement on writing style and grammar will definitely make it a top ranking novel.
I think the story is very good and pretty interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
Wow! I love the plot, the flow of the story and also the genre. Knowing the author personally somehow added to the excitement of reading the first chapters! I will be sure to return and read some more chapters soon! this is a highly enjoyable read! Best of luck my dear friend! ♥
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This book is so good?!!? I really like how the story develops and the author really has put on her passion in here. Ive seen books where readers get lost in writers world but writer getting lost in readers world is different and unique. Keep it up
woah.. great work author... everything is so perfect.. the synopsis is so catchy and literally this novel is a chef kiss..I would highly recommend it to everyone..
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...........Writing quality is one of the best ............story development is also best . ........... Character design is also very detailed. I wish you win the contest best of luck .