Synopsis
D hated most things. Being a Hunter's Apprentice was one of them. Risking his life for scraps was almost worse than the orphanage. When only he survived after the hunting party dined on it's most recent target he thought things were changing for the better.
But now it seems hunger is still his most hated thing.
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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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Good Story! The writing quality is still improving per chapter. The author is making sure that his grammar is in check. For the stability of updates, it is still challenging for him. I can see it through his writings. There are a lot of things needed to fix and loopholes. The story development is slow. There are funny lines and series of conversations between the protagonist and his supporting characters. However, the character design lacks proper descriptions and the author doesn't add more actions for his words. How exactly he wants to do it is in his hands. The world itself has an abundant background and boundless journey, so I judge it fairly. I recommend for the editors and his fans to support this series.
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Story starts out slow but draws you in. The main character is so single minded he is oblivious to the plots around him. Despite being so antisocial he still manages to do the right thing. I look forward to seeing what will happen next and how D handles it.