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System in Martial Universe
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History about a guy that died and reincarnated with a system in the world of Martial Universe as his wish
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I will give this 5 stars because it is a wu dong qian kun fanfiction ...................................................................
This kind of thing is better not to writte it, maybe im being an asshole but man this novel really put me in a bad mood, mc is a retard one of the big ones, well is better to say that it feals like the mc has no life, the cheats are garbage, so op but so useles. What make me jump to writte this was actually the fact that woman cant look at the mc withour blushing is like wtf, also red hair and orange eyes vomit. Hope you can think more so that the things you write in the future are coherent. Btw the lv of english is not that bad.
system - yes wishes - yes reincarnation - yes looks promising, please keep writing --------------------------------------------------------------------------
I have nothing else to say other then This fanfic is a perfect Copy paste of the original And Only the first to third chapter being his own writing
MC have system and strong enough to conquer world,but MC just to want to be third wheel side character. author just ruin everything.
The only thing I guess you could call decent is he used a different novel as the foundation for this fanfic. Everything else is trash, english, grammar, the author being dumb, social interactions, the mc himself. I'm sorry but this is just a waste of time. An example of the author saying something stupid (but first let's find a basement... 10 hours later he found a cave.) Mind you he was in a forest. And let's was tets, plus the mc had no character, he was killed told to pick some wishes did that, bought a bloodline, and then sat in pain for 12 hours. I'm sorry I just cant recommend a fanfic with so many bad things about it.
It could be good who knows? But this is the first fanfiction I found from wu dong qian kun so goo luck and keep it up (don't drop plz ;-;).👍
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GOOD 👍 More chapters please 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍..................... ............... ...............
Why ⁵ ? Read the goddamn name!! Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it
Good don't drop it😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Despite the lack luster grammar this novel is still really good, even with my bias towards it being a wu dong qian kun based fanfic. I hope you make it even better and keep it going.
this novel so repulsing i want to vomit at how dumb he is. if you want to read this ill summarize it for you. this is a shit novel don't read
The story is better than before 😍😍😍😍😍👍👍👍👍👍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎👌👌👌👌
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Yes, this one star is legitimate. If I could vote zero star or even negative, I would. This is serious. You can read the fanfic and you will know why I Saud this. OP unlimited wish cliche and he ask for some good OP wish(Not as good as those veteran reader but he cover up the basic unlimited resource in his private space with system that have unlimited point..) And yet he is still noob... Author is making his character strong, yet also weak. Apart from becoming pedo and get qingTan as girlfriend, I don't what is Mc doing... He didn't even use his cheat after he finish his first small training to manifestation level... All I can say is if you want to read this fanfic, cultivate a Teletubbies heart and mindset..