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A 20-years old boy transmigrated into the female-dominated novel world, But not as a protagonist nor as the main villain.
He transmigrated as the green tea boyfriend of the main female CEO heroine and will become the first target of the protagonist of this novel. Alex was scared for his life. In the novel, it's impossible to defeat the son of luck.
When he was helpless, the golden finger exclusive for travelers came.
[Ding! The Female Raider System is being loaded.]
Alex was excited thinking that he doesn't need to go close to a high cold female CEO but the system tells him different things.
[Ding! As long as the host raids the heroines and increases their affection, the Host will receive heaven-defying rewards.]
So his journey as green tea/White lotus raiding began.
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I really couldn't stand reading this sheet. The author confused being a villain with being dishonorable and spineless. Mc migrates to a world dominated by women and is supposedly the 'villain'. Once he gets the system, he acts extremely spineless and without dignity. The way he uses the system and his pacifist attitude is so disgusting that it made me want to vomit while reading. He doesn't want to get involved with the so-called pratogonist, he wants a technically peaceful life. And in order to protect this so-called peaceful and valuable life, he doesn't hesitate to act like a woman. It's frankly amazing that a person who has lived as a man for years in the world can be so transgender. The original pratogonist (that universe) is more of a man. In short, if you like reading about a spineless, cowardly, peaceful and feminine (acting) Mc, you might love this novel. For me it was just disgusting and annoying.
*This just my initial review* okay Mr. Author.. the concept of your story is.. good, i cant say great but.. average and for me its good.. but your style of writting is not good for short-med chapter. conversations is broken by explanations, Info dump here and there. should make AUX chapter rather than dump on chapters because it feel cheap for pay-to-read. example of conversations.. MC: "Hello there" *Explanations of something useless or irrelevant* Girl: "hey, how're you" *inner monologoue with 2-4 paragraph of explanations* that is not good style of writting for short-med chapter my bro.. if you want that style, you have to be use 10-15K words, and cant be less.. this is just my opinions. because this annoying for me, that Also this is PAY-TO-READ. this is not worth kinda feeling i have. maybe just for me, but maybe there is some readers feel the same. i dont know, thanks.
The idea is nice but unfortunately it feels like you are reading the essay of a grade school kid. The grammar is … well non existent.
The author is the real villain. He misleads his readers into thinking this mc has some sort of guts to him. No! He is a worthless beta male cuck. If this is the way the author describes a villain I'd like to see the author in real life bringing in some juice for her wife's kids and her boyfriend before sending them to off a seventh honeymoon while he takes care of the kids.
Gave it 1 star as it is the lowest possible ranking. I think even a robot would be better suited to write a story better than this trash. This novel is written by a guy with the imagination of a child and clearly a virgin. I had to reread some the chapters of Shadow Slave just to wash my eyes of this trash. Webnovel should really have a board of reviewers to sort through these kind of abominations. Not everyone can be a writer and neither should they allowed to be one.
Author writing quality is low, too much explaining with next to little happen in one chapter, grammar is bad even basic he/she often wrong, the character actually should have interesting personality but the way Author written it still seems bland like reading diary, this novel got lucky with concept and trend
typical Chinese story, well if you don't count the protagonist's lack of pride and how he prefers to be the girl in the relationship You also have to unlock it from chapter 17 not recommended, just a loss
Same old chinese urban novel that you've probably read a million times before..........................................................................
Man, I like how you didn't delete 1-star reviews. ...,....,..... ...........,............,......,.m... Mm...... M ...,....................
Although there are problems with MC. But the novel was interesting and I got to chapter 18 (At that time there were no more chapters in the novel) Now I'm going to read 3 new chapters. BOOM PAY. Happy New Year, as they say! My gift to you is 1 star.
This story is giving me a stroke. It's really punishing to read. And the story! Well, it's just plain horrible. 100+ chapters in and it's only 3-4 days in the story. Lots of things happened in this 100 chapters, so many info dumps, so many events and so many women that I barely remember them at all. I stopped reading for a day and I barely remember what happened in this novel. Sayonara. I highly advise the author to use Grammarly, very useful for non-English speakers.
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I wanted to read this novel. but all chapter are paid. I have never use money on web novel because it is worthless. Bro at leat activated the free fast pass card option or do more chapter which are paid on Patreon
Mc migrates to a world dominated by women and is supposedly the 'villain'. Once he gets the system, he acts extremely spineless and without dignity.😓😓😓 The way he uses the system and his pacifist attitude is so disgusting that it made me want to vomit while reading. He doesn't want to get involved with the so-called protagonist, he wants a technically peaceful life. And in order to protect this so-called peaceful and valuable life, he doesn't hesitate to act like a woman.😂😂😂 It's frankly amazing that a person who has lived as a man for years in the world can be so transgender. The original protagonist (that universe) is more of a man. 🤔 In short, if you like reading about a spineless, cowardly, peaceful and feminine (acting) Mc, you might love this novel. For me it was just disgusting and annoying.👎🏻
writing again terrible writing skill, trash grammar, mess of pacing, bit of Yuri between female lead and her mother, (yes anything seksual between females it's Yuri)
.................................................................. It was a good novel until you ruined it in Chapter 60...............................................
very very slow development of the story and always writing unnecessary and very unimportant things for the story itself ............................. ................,....,............
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Why not? Why not i as the author shamelessly leave 5 star review on my novel.