SuperSoldier (SI-OC/MCU)

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EmmaCruzader

Surprisingly I haven't given myself a review yet, like any self-respecting egocentric author this will get 5 stars in all sections. Thanks for all the support! Give me your power stones :D

LV 5

LastGod

so... i thought this was VERY GOOD. The problem is you have a chapter called voglebaum..... World mashups NEVER work. Because plot holes develop and are never solved, so if this is, instead of turning into a cool SI of marvel. Turns into a mash up of the boys and marvel.... then that's the end of this story, really cause then you basically have an immortal murder hobo who will kill all that oppose him. Also, fitting some of these characters into a world already full of mutants, inhumans, Eternals, cosmic beings, godlike aliens, etc.. is almost impossible. Messy is always the results and of course the author always drops it when it get to much a mess to solve the plot.

LV 5

Darth_Ullyses

we need more.. but no rush keep up the good work

LV 4

Aayush_storms

please don't drop this it is the only good Captain America si on this whole app

LV 1

1emanresU

Looks promising, it's well written, the story is developing in an interesting direction and even though the author calls the MC a self insert, instead of the usual personalityless blank sheet we have an actual character a personality. Looking forward to the next chapter.

LV 4

YESandYES

I think it's pretty good so far..........

LV 14

Zakino

Introducing Compound V to others was horrible decision. Author already introduced mutants unneccesary which never works in any ff and now this. Disappointing.

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SAURON_

booo how dare you make a good story and then destroy it with adding the boys when not needed or wanted it was good till you wanted more "plot" when we had mutants then you changed raven and charles Xavier's fate and then you decide to add vogelbaum

LV 14

GhostAKilla

Will you have the radiation power ?Keep it up man

LV 15

gutless

it's peak .

LV 13

RodolfoMaou

The writing in this fanfic is truly remarkable. The chapters are meticulously structured, maintaining a perfect balance that keeps readers hooked from start to finish. Each chapter ends in a way that leaves you eagerly anticipating the next, creating an addictive reading experience. The protagonist stands out as a fascinating character, defined by a somewhat selfish personality that adds depth and realism. His human flaws and the way he navigates through them make him incredibly relatable and compelling. Watching him interact with the world around him is one of the story's highlights, as his actions and decisions reveal layers of complexity and potential for growth. The subtle hints of character development sprinkled throughout the narrative keep readers invested in his journey, eager to see how his experiences will shape him. Setting the story during World War II is a brilliant choice that sets it apart from many other fanfics. The wartime backdrop is vividly brought to life, with battles that are both thrilling and strategically grounded. The author's attention to detail in depicting military strategies adds a layer of authenticity that enhances the overall experience. The protagonist's personal goals intertwine seamlessly with the historical setting, driving the plot forward in a way that feels both grounded and aspirational. The changes he brings about create intriguing possibilities for world-building in future chapters, leaving readers excited for what’s to come. As I write this review, the first arc has been finished on a fantastic way and I can’t wait to see where the story will go next.

LV 4

Unknown_To_All

The author takes an interesting take combining two serums that would normally never come together but does so in a way that you want to see more combinations in other fics. They also keep a good pacing and don’t rush straight to the main MCU timeline and actually learn about the ongoing of their current world. The writing quality is also high with clear effort put into their work.

LV 14

Slowest_Turtle

Love it! This is my favourite story of yours, by far. Can't wait for more! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

LV 4

rak_iwal

This story is amazing,hope author doesn't drop it .

LV 4

mixedSaint

I’ve been a fan of this author’s work since I’ve stumbled upon their Invincible ff several weeks ago. Quality of writing is excellent, the character is interesting and I’m excited to see how he develops on his journey, I also enjoy how the story is developing and it opens up many new options and variables that have great potential to be explored. Author, you are doing a fantastic job, once again, and I can’t wait to see where you take this story.

LV 11

Akahime

very, VERY FCKNG GOOD

LV 15

BurglarOfTurds

well written and interesting, but upload schedule leaves much to be desired lol 1 star updating stability

LV 1

DVA

Not bad. But problem of power inflation is sad. More power is no more plot and space for another character. You will be needing for more challenges for more powerful hero. Look at captain marvel, she is so powerful that she was instantly deleted from the plot. If she wasn't deleted it is fuckup with all MCU. Now you create CM pirate edition and look at is: another character go to useless. It is bad. You put in more characters and they more useless than more plot going. It is not for all fic, but for "ascending" arc. I lose my interest as more power MC take. What can be better? Real stuff like fails and hard choices like TV The Boy's. No for inflation power MC and bad ass. Better if we have real drama, like attacking cities supermonster and real problems how take down this threat. Not only shiny MC and only successfully joinery. Steel good Marty Sue story, but may be better.

LV 3

Anubhav_Bharshiv

MC character development is great, storyline is good and power development is also reasonable as storyline advanced. keep it up , this novel has potential 👍👍

LV 4

Krails710

good novel ///////////////////////////////