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Synopsis
A boy born with the powers of Superman in the Marvel Universe. It is the story of a young man who will rise to the peak.
The story will include universes like 'The Incredibles, Marvel, and Ben10.
[It is a simple story, made for fun and entertainment and doesn't intend to damage anyone. It's purely fictional. I don't own any content and it belongs to respective. the content I write belong to respected owners and this is simply fiction]
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Harem recommendation :Gwen, x 23, black cat, Wanda, invisible woman, she hulk, silk, Jean grey, Emma frost, storm rogue,captain marvel, black widow
This is dumb, everything happens just because, the plot advances at the whim and convenience of the script. The Mc doesn't think, doesn't question, doesn't have free will. His powers fail randomly to make you think he has no powers, but he has absolute control of them, there is no evolution from Man to Superman. He just has the powers and can do whatever he wants. And the love interest thing happened because yes, they meet and the MC falls in love, there is no explanation just because the author wanted it that way and it's going to be that way in every interaction after that one.
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There are too many unnecessary descriptions in the chapters, which are repeated paragraph after paragraph. The narration from the author occurs not as in fan fiction or a modern science fiction novel, but as in a work of medieval literature. The characters' actions are completely illogical and inconsistent. It feels like the Author is transferring his mental development problems onto his characters!
Sorry, the author, but you didn't succeed))) I didn 't understand anything at all , you need to be able to understand such nonsense ,........................................................