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Hoplite Thirty-Seven had thought he was going to die, that his long career of serving Terna and the Eighth Arm had come to an end after the antimatter bomb had detonated... Yet that had not been the case. Instead, he had ended up on a back-water world where nothing made sense.
Magic wasn't supposed to be real, neither were elves or other fantasy creatures... yet here on Ahkoolis, that was reality.
Stranded in a hostile environment he didn't understand, Hoplite will struggle to come to grips with his new surroundings as he seeks out the other survivors of The Sparrow... If any could be found.
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an ifunny retard can write a story?!?!? great!! ur still a retard though a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a
MF really posted his Story onto iFunny The grind is real, and it never stops. 💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀
Fantasic story so far, I saw an ad for it on another website, and decided to come take a look. The story and world building to the story is fantastic and sucked me right in. Every time there was a hole in the story, it was explained and elaborated on shortly after. I look forward to reading more!
Ifunny gang, were colonizing new lands abroad, all shall be brought under our flag. Thought i will say it was wierd to find your post about this book in featured, most of the others iv found in collective.
Glad that I started reading this, expe cting great things to come![img=coins][img=exp][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I saw the feature so I’m here to support my fellow ifunnytard. The book looks very interesting so I really hope the author sticks with this and continues to write.
Really amazing work! I loved the gritty, dark undertones from the sci-fi mixing itself with the fantastical elements of the world. Really looking forward to seeing that Marine saved too
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Super fun read, started since early book one and still eager for each new chapter the development for characters/plot is interesting and I'm thoroughly invested in what the end of their journey will be. It isn't often I read a book but once I found this one I haven't been able to put it down.
not really a review but more of a plea for more,so please author make more chapters but I do understand the time to create a good story
This has been one of the best novel I read on this app so far. The writing quality is good, barely any misspell, the world building is interesting. Though I gotta say many things are many things I found quite confusing regarding how this new world came to be or how they society works. I guess I just had to follow through and findind out these stuffs as the story goes on and on. Thanks for this great story.
Its a genuinely good read, not the most original idea but it still tackles tired tropes with a new view. The details the author implements are really spot on and help to paint a vivid picture of the situations our protagonists encounter
Its ight, I can guess the development of the story line as the leader of hoplites civilization suddenly disappeared must have a connection to this world he dropped in too, I also wonder how he'll fight when his ammos dwindle out. Either he finds more escape pods of his creemates ඞඞඞඞ or that of the aliens. And he'll then use their ammo and weapons, or that he'll find a facility that is connected to the leader of his civilization. Anyways just a retard trying to act smart
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Excellent read so far. Good world building, characters are actively fleshed out and worked on, however, hopefully the development thus far and future development of the characters is remembered/kept in mind by the author in the future when drawing up plot lines. Unique story that is interesting to read and looking forward to where it goes.
Incredibly excited to see where the author takes this story. Worldbuilding, imagery, characterization, and writing flow are all top tier. I’m glad I found you in the mess that is the featured pit.
good concepts consistent characters interesting story possibilities for much deeper back story into the human empire curious why they didnt just call them teran instead of terna seemed like a misspell that the author just rolled with
Lovin the good read, saw all y'er posts on ifunny and finally decided to join in. I love the characters, same with the story-telling and world-building. Can't wait for more releases, y'er killin it.
One of the best reads I've had on this platform, with great world-building, and interesting character dynamics. I am greatly looking forward to more!
I cant believe I found this gem amongst the garbage of Ifunny featured.