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Super Gene Fan-Fiction
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Things happen Mc gets 5 wishes and wakes up as an orphan in Super Gene on Planet Roca adopted by Han Sen's Parents
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too much op, I like mary sue but this is just too much ...................................................................................................................
Goddess: I'll give you 5 wishes MC: *Ask for at least 20 wishes* Goddess: Okay, I'll grant your wishes 5 WISHES MY ASS!!! 0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000
So... Let me get this straight... 4 chapters. 4 fucking chapters and i already want to kill the author. Let start with the very basic. Death background... Yada2 normal and honestly quite promising although there so many fucking stuff that unnecessary. Overall not bad Next is wish. 5 wish, not bad. Basically mathematics question 5 wish with at least 5 branch of question. The question is... Are you fucking retarded? How in the bloody hell people are allowed to get their wish like that? And for someone who his future we dont have any clue? Fucking stupid. Next is his childhood or whatever that **** he is. Fucking stupid, how in the bloody hell he is afraid of other childs. The next is how in the fucking hell that a 3 y o kid talking with ***** about 1 on 1 question? Next is writing style... Paragraph too thick need more spacing. Especially with the content it literally killing the mood to read it. Overall rating... 1/5 And if this review is gone. Meaning it is get deleted by the author... And if you do it... FUCK YOU. Before i end this, you can say that "the story will get better on later chapter" let me say this to you... "In this place. First impressions matter"
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Honestly i think the Author should delete these reviews about 5 wishes bs. Yes it's basically more then 5 wishes, but what's the big deal? He still needs to train these. If you say to many abilitys, then you don't know what many is, because it's not even close to to many.(even then the Author can just make a Auxiliary chapter with the abilitys and everything is alright.) The abilitys are not OP to so i don't know what you guys have, he actually needs to train these. He can't even use most because he still to weak. These wishes benefit him in the long run, even if he were OP already it would not be a big deal. Just think about how many fanfics the mc is extremly op and people don't complain. So i don't know why you act like you have a Massive A.na.l Infection.(my normal review would be 4,0 to 4,5 because i don't know much about Super-Gene. But the others are giving low ratings for extremly petty reasons.)
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Ayy man I remember you from the discord and I saw this on power rankings. You are right next to me lol 78 and 79 I think. I haven’t read it yet but excited to see a super gene fan fic. This was one of the topics in the future I planned to maybe make a fan fic of it if I had time.
Finally.This is sooo amazing and great,and i just wanted to say something?Why no RINNEGAN?Give him the rinnegan,but later in life/story if he has uchiha + hashirama as fruit he should get rinnegan.
completely destroyed anything about the super gene story. waste of time in my opinion.
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Good but maybe try to edit the wishes part since most people will think that he has too many wishes or he's too op even tho he can't use most of his wishes and gets exhausted just trying to summon a flower since he doesn't have much geno points yet
Well this is a weird novel, not in a bad way really, I mean it starts, how do I say... not really interesting, is more like really cliché and probably you will feel discouraged for the way the author wrote about the wishes (well at least I was, and that doesn’t necessarily mean someone else will too) basically any of the wishes would make him completely broken with due time on a world in which he knows the future, but only on his first wish he got five different thing and that probably bothers you since well how can it be a single wish if I can wish for as many things as I want, in this regard I think the author could just sume it up as asking a geno art that grants him the ability to control de five elements, the other thing is that since there are so many wishes most people won’t be able to keep with them, I don’t even remember most of the Devil fruit powers already lol, more is not always better, but here I would say that the author actually does a good job in how the mc actually needs to train his powers and geno arts and that’s great, the second issue would be how easy he trust people for example Luo whatever and later on Yan Manlie, and while the first could be blamed on him actually being a small orphan the second doesn’t make sense, he could just tell her that it was something personal and be done with it and taking account what they know about him it would make sense for them to assume it was a geno art he was developing. So overall the novel has potential and the author is clearly improving, actually I would say that except for how he wrote the paragraph on the beginning the only other problem the novel has would be the mc no giving us the feeling of him being an actual person, his social interactions feel weird sometimes and some of the things he do doesn’t make sense and we aren’t really told what he is thinking while doing them, or why he doesn’t know certain things and like that, but it feels like the novel can develop a lot once the author gain more experience writing and that’s the idea, so keep up bro, it is actually entertaining and the idea is good even while it may be a little rough around the edges
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