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Starting from Young Justice
4.18 (10 audimat)
Synopsis
"Nicholas Kyle Dunamis"
"You have the ability to overcome great fear"
"Should you choose to accept this ring you will one of the gaurdians of space sector 2814"
-"huh?"
-"go away I don't wanna be a lantern."
The cover picture is not owned by me and is close to the appearance I want the MC to look like.
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État de l’alimentation hebdomadaire
-- Classement
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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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Story was Ok and interesting at the start, sadly Author decided to throw MC into living with Batman for no reason. He was happy living with Selina Kyle and then bamm now he's living with Batman it's so ugh that it ruined story for me imo.
For now, only problem i found is grammar, two or three error there and there,, but stability of updated SUPER.. Your story got my interest i must say... Well, i hope you won't drop it, Good day,
So he asks to be part Anodite, part viltrumite, and is a meta human with adaption powers, also gets opi-opi no mi. He gets found by catwomen then when he gets his power she dumps him as Batman’s then he gets stronger and then cut superman in half with opi-opi no mi and then is “forced” to show his powers to bats and sups. He also has an ai that is level 10 (in Ben 10) but can’t hack Batman’s stuff??? Then you say she can’t (oh yeah it’s a femal witch bearly listen to you and it’s only purpose is to hold knowledge witch my can’t even access. I wanted to stop when he was left witch Batman when he got powers but read on to see if it get better(it doesn’t).
KEEP IT UP. KEEP IT UP. KEEP IT UP. KEEP IT UP. KEEP IT UP. KEEP IT UP. KEEP IT UP. KEEP IT UP. KEEP IT UP. KEEP IT UP. KEEP IT UP. KEEP IT UP. KEEP IT UP.
Just don’t have romance But your also writing a fic that has soul magic DC has soul magic you could easy have one woman who would never betray u with that if I was thrown in DC I would do that
Great Job man! There is an interesting premise. I like the powerset of the protagonist. I hope you continue.
It's excellent. I just hope this is not a harem