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****WARNING: If Oukoku e Tsuzuku is offensive to you in any way then you probably won’t like the MCs attitude or the level of lemon!****
A story about a man named Daiki Ichijou who after living as a virgin for 25 years inexplicably gets a date with a beautiful woman who has a motherly feel to her.
Well that motherly feeling was because her true identity is Gaia, in other words Mother Earth herself. Finding out about their trust, Ouranos becomes enraged a mere mortal touches her and punches him so hard that he dies.
However, it seems that punch was even more powerful than expected as his parallel selves in other worlds all get inexplicably injured as a blunt force hits them. In one of those world Daiki was actually skydiving at the time and got knocked out...
The gods of the Greek pantheon after beating the living shit out of Ouranos for interfering in mortal affairs took pity on Daiki. Although they couldn’t revive him in his original world as many had seen him spectacularly and spontaneously explode, they could send him too the world where skydiving Daiki went solar into the ocean.
However, when creating his new body the gods may have gone a little bit overboard...
Oh he will also have a system.
*This literary work is inspired by akikan40’s Start by Becoming a Mangaka. I am writing this simply because I couldn’t find any other works that are a mash of anime worlds like SBM without them having a pitiful chapter count.*
**I have been thinking about it and I realize I don’t want my rating to be based on the first 100 unedited or criticized chapters. So instead I will release the first 25 and use the comments and reviews to edit them and workshop my future chapters**
***I OWN NONE OF THESE CHARACTERS EXCEPT FOR DAIKI ICHIJOU***
[If you could write a review it would be much appreciated]
[Book cover is not mine]
[Chapter word count: Goal~1.4k-3k]
[Goal is to release at least 10 chapter per week that means it could be 1-2 chapters per day or literally no chapters for six days then 10 on Sunday, but either way I will make sure to continuously add onto and grow this novel’s length]
[This novel has explicit sex scenes if you couldn't gather that from the 'No one under 17 Warning' or the combination of the R18, Harem, and Romance tags]
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It's really good story. I have already read it multiple time and time again. Hope there will be new chapter or new story about how his life after this story is over.
Hmmm,well idea is not bad.Even if it's other,if you can improve and make it entratining,than it's all fair.But yeah,how to say.Idea is flawed in the core.Harem don't work in a normal environment,it's will be in the end just a wishfufilment kind of story.And here goes you first problem,you think too deeply,but can't come with satisfying nor for youself,nor for the readers.And try to be somewhat in between.How to pinpoint this,try to understand how ln in slice of life work.There is always ups and downs.All character can't be here all the time,especially if you try make it more serious.Akkikan mostly make a fanservice.Your on the other hand try to be more in development area.That's not bad.But ln mostly make a spotlight for new heroine and new kind of story and problem every tome.That's what's call pacing.Like I said,try to have more 1on1 story with mc and girl you choose,than try to incorporate her in a bigger picter.Next is pacing,having 3 problem in the same time is already taxing,so make sure to have priority.And the most glaring problem of all new ln,it's don't have much to offer on a problem scale.Like I said ups and down,if you just be stagnant all the time with minor change,like some biatch from different anime come and be cocky,but we all know that it's not even a problem,people don't feel like the story moving.Or you can just stop thinking,live all in a fan-service care and daily updates.That's deffinetly going make you popular,not so much actually,but there is not much options so meh...
Need more chapters please 🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏 😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏😁🙏
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Just Another story with no plot, no backround, no world, stuffed full with one dimensional fu*k-toys. Basically a guy's(or a girl's *shrug*) wet-dream. Attractive to some. Not so much to others. I fall in the second category which means I may be biased. No personality: 4 chapters in (how much I could read before dropping) and the biggest character development is that the MC has a "Daddy" kink. The poor women saw his di*k, he ordered her "be mine" and basically drugged her(the pheromones are clouding thinking so they fall into drugs category), before having a heart-wrenching moment of love and acceptance("I'm an Alien" "Oh ****, cool, can we smash now?"). That shows enough reasons for me to drop this. While this ff can't be saved for me, I wish you the best of luck.
Copy paste Title in Akikan .... hahahaha........ but i support you :v ............................................................................................................................................
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